ghost

thank you kindly Elario..

love Crim

I have learned that ghosts teach us patience
which exorcises the ghosts. We simply must
be willing to face them and not hide.

Good, cathartic write, Brenda.

thank you Sage one I'm trying to exorcise this one through writing..

love Brenda

This is a masterpiece of erotic brilliance.
How I understand your words.
It is a deep ache into your core..in between euphoric breaths.

Amazing ink!

thank you graciously :)

love Crim

My kind of poetry, Brenda. You thrill us with your "wants"
and bring us back to reality with the here and now . . .

thank you Jerry I cherish your thoughts my friend :)

love Brenda

Loved it Crim
That last line brought it all together too.

🤓

thank you DC you always make me smile :)

love Crim

Insanely Imaginative

thank you most graciously Jesse :)

love and respect Crim

The ghosts seem more illusions and erotic memories than anything supernatural.  This stanza is particularly fascinating:

"I seek you in the night
it's your flesh I seek to devour
feeling your soul reach out to mine
I turn and flee"

It seems you're all in for a good fuck, no more no less.  You're not looking for his soul, hence the hasty retreat.  Crim just trying to keep it simple. And then a clever surprise ending:

"looking in the mirror
I realize I'm the phantom
without any real substance"

Mixed feelings about that one.  I'd say you have plenty of substance and not a drop of ectoplasm in sight.  You should be seeing beauty in that mirror.  And again:

"just fuck me poetry ("me" should probably be "my")
dressed up in love's clothing"

I'm dressed in wolf's clothing so I'll take you up on that, Lady Crim.  Most satisfying work!

thank you Sir Crow I'm not sure where this one came from.. it just came to me.. I wasn't really sure how to reply because this one has me saying huh? love your in depth take on it I've really been thinking about it still am..

love Crim

thank you most graciously Todski :)

love Brenda

OMG, this was hella-wicked! That first stanza was impeccable, and it set the stage for a beautifully dramatic emotional thought, that dried into a heartfelt poem....xo

thank you lovely Rain :)

love Brenda

BRAVO!! Standing ovation Crim......wonderful ink flowing from your viens as always.......this is a Wowzers!!!!! Tipping my pen in respect and luv to you......purple luv & hugs your way xo :)

aw thank you graciously beautiful Flower :)

love Crim

The want is palatable! It's hard wanting something out of reach.

glad you feel the want and desire of this write Xmar because that's what it is..

love Brenda

"I get drunk on your essence
aroused I ride my man into oblivion "
been there a time or two ...
.... don't care what your verses are dressed at,
they're bloody gorgeous
xoxox

thank you so much beautiful Katja I cherish you :)

love Brenda

thank you most kindly..

love Crim

The spirit of want, a desire that truly haunts...yea I surely know it well. Excellent piece of ink my sweetheart

thank you dearest Poe yea it does..

love Crim

I love your rawness my
ladyloves.

and then this:
[sipping you like the finest whiskey
I get drunk on your essence
aroused I ride my man into oblivion]

swear my  mouth and lips
are gglistening with drool and then the aches deepened  ;)

holyfiresofheavenlypits..

Feeling your burn love

-Howlings


 

thank you beautiful Howlings I love and cherish your thoughts..

love Crim

how you writhe, Crim, impaled by poetry;
it's an exotic vision...

thank you John great to see you on my pages..  
 
love Crim

So you are also haunted by ghosts? ;-)

This is truly a masterpiece... I could feel every line!

Love, Duende

thank you graciously :)

yes a man haunts my thoughts and dreams..

love Crim

My dearest Brenda what a wonderful write. Love is a kind of fucked up thing. So many times we find ourselves falling for someone that we cannot have or were not able to keep. Then are haunting by desires that linger to haunt us. Then we end up settling for someone else but never truly letting go of the other.  I love  the twisted end....
I love surprises. As always, you deliver. Thank you for the treat beautiful one.

Keith

thank you dearest Keith for getting my write..

xo Brenda

Brenda.. i'm fucking loving your newest writes.. they're raw and refreshing.. love you..



Dave

aw Dave you've moved me greatly with your enthusiastic comments and love you've shown me..

xo Brenda

Beautiful