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Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
Being Alone is Her Default
I.
We spill across sand because
nothing can hold us back.
Aquatic creatures swimming
the coastal waters of mankind;
always mistresses, never wives.
Our mystery is our strength;
our strength our independence.
The Ocean is a refuge, our lives
unstoppable waves cracking
the shipyards of commerce.
When angry, we swell; when hurt
we rise up to a category greater
than our depths; we evade nets;
we swallow ships, our graveyards
are vast, watery treks of death;
We live, but are haunted from within
memories; we churn as caterpillar’s
from shore to shore, rhythmic motion
seeking a channel to lead us home
to the inner sanctum of our ourselves.
II.
There is no reflection in the ocean;
dark water ensures its inventory
of sunken treasure is concealed;
men dive in vain for the diagram
of creation, their map of origin.
When we feel trapped we carve
new ways of escape; we chisel
rough stone until a smooth fall;
we rust iron until its oxide doors
pinprick our metal imprisonment.
Yet, despite our resolve, some
discover their Sacred Contract;
as above becomes below reflected
in glacier'd eyes of equal Love
for the first time. It's then we affirm
no man is an island unto himself,
and we learn neither is any woman.
~
(for J, my equal)
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
26th Jul 2016 2:38pm
They say that if you remove the water from the earth, there are no Islands, just earth. I don't actually know who said that, maybe no one. But I feel that way about how we as people separate from one another, sex, nationality, creed. Beautiful words, I will revisit this a few times today. Thank you for this.
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Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jul 2016 3:05pm
26th Jul 2016 3:02pm
A man has to be reborn again and again and again and he will still never have the strength of mental or emotional capacity of a woman.
When they (men) will finally understand and accept...EGO will be shattered and the world will be at peace.
Ahavati, this is wonderfully written, magnificently portrayed, immaculately conceived (<< fitting description i think lol) tribute to all women, the seed and light of all life.
When they (men) will finally understand and accept...EGO will be shattered and the world will be at peace.
Ahavati, this is wonderfully written, magnificently portrayed, immaculately conceived (<< fitting description i think lol) tribute to all women, the seed and light of all life.
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
26th Jul 2016 3:07pm
"Our mystery is our strength;
our strength our independence.
The Ocean is a refuge, our lives
unstoppable waves cracking
the shipyards of commerce."
so many layers to this beautiful write..
lovely lady it's true we women wield much power though it's true we do need each other..
swimming in your depths I am reborn..
love Crim
our strength our independence.
The Ocean is a refuge, our lives
unstoppable waves cracking
the shipyards of commerce."
so many layers to this beautiful write..
lovely lady it's true we women wield much power though it's true we do need each other..
swimming in your depths I am reborn..
love Crim
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
26th Jul 2016 4:12pm
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
26th Jul 2016 8:03pm
An elemental composition. My teacher says, be like water. It flows around obstacles and erodes opposition. Each stanza offers great insights to ponder. Wonderful work.
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
26th Jul 2016 9:30pm
..I don't have any words, Ahavati!
I mean, I do but I can't quite put a thought together worthy enough
to express how I feel about this write that would do it justice.
I'm cognitively confound at the moment. That's truly a compliment... xo
I mean, I do but I can't quite put a thought together worthy enough
to express how I feel about this write that would do it justice.
I'm cognitively confound at the moment. That's truly a compliment... xo
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
Your soul is so ancient, in its infancy the cosmos was your neighbor as a spirit child, Ahavati. I don't know how I know, but I always have...
Thank you for being there for us all...
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Thank you for being there for us all...
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
26th Jul 2016 11:10pm
"throw yo hands up at meee", lol, seriously, these pieces are nuclear ,I bow to your wisdom...
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
Anonymous
27th Jul 2016 00:47am
wisdom from the depths of time. for all.
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
27th Jul 2016 1:21am
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27th Jul 2016 9:29am
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
27th Jul 2016 9:34am
no man is an island unto himself,
and we learn neither is any woman.
That two lines are my favourite. A talented write Ahavati:)
and we learn neither is any woman.
That two lines are my favourite. A talented write Ahavati:)
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
27th Jul 2016 2:08pm
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27th Jul 2016 3:46pm
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
27th Jul 2016 5:29pm
oh vati,
would that i could have
spoken this as wedding vows...
... amen to this
& gratitude to you
for sharing your gift
xo
would that i could have
spoken this as wedding vows...
... amen to this
& gratitude to you
for sharing your gift
xo
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
Anonymous
27th Jul 2016 5:50pm
Mermaids in our past, present, and future.
Always learning dear sister.
🙏
Always learning dear sister.
🙏
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
28th Jul 2016 3:25am
as above so below, dear sister - alchemical indeed
in the depths we learn and from the depths we rise - a very wonderful series
in the depths we learn and from the depths we rise - a very wonderful series
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
28th Jul 2016 3:43am
No one ever made a noose out of strength, only from weakness... but it is strength they fear. And like they say, 'Go figure... '
Thank you for another wonderful and stimulating write.
Thank you for another wonderful and stimulating write.
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
2nd Aug 2016 8:36am
from the sea & back again.
would be so nice to float if we couldn't drown.
there's a wellspring where poems are born; you draw from it...
would be so nice to float if we couldn't drown.
there's a wellspring where poems are born; you draw from it...
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Re. Sacred Contracts XXVII: Independent Women
Anonymous
10th Aug 2016 3:31pm
So very beautiful. 💓
Words of strength and truth.
Words of strength and truth.
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10th Aug 2016 4:16pm
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