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Good Girl Bad Girl
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No need for correction
I'll be good girl bad girl
to satisfy the moment
of your towering erection.
Don't need directions
I'm not lost
Right from wrong
Honest and the truth of
this love that's gotten hold
of us both
smiling perceptions
the thoughts held close.
No need for correction
I'll be good girl bad girl
to satisfy the moment
of your towering erection.
Don't need directions
I'm not lost
Right from wrong
Honest and the truth of
this love that's gotten hold
of us both
smiling perceptions
the thoughts held close.
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Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 7:14am
Hang on sister! You and I could do some damage😝
It's a hot night for you and DU🌷
Trish. ..
It's a hot night for you and DU🌷
Trish. ..
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Them boys better watch out when us fedora riding girls be wanting rodeo lmao!
Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
22nd Jul 2016 7:42am
Sounds good to me ^^
On a side note: my phone broke today so no emoji for you :-p
On a side note: my phone broke today so no emoji for you :-p
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Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
22nd Jul 2016 9:18am
Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
22nd Jul 2016 5:34pm
Damn straight, "to satisfy the moment / of your towering erection."
THAT is, in itself, a poem. To learn how to overcome
certain stereotypes and to just embrace the freedom
which intercourse demands . . . As you are giving of
yourself you partner in crime has been completely
adsorbed by your vagina, giving into it as would a
slave to his master. When this duel acceptance is
achieved you are only fucking because you can,
afraid of trying things new, and that, my friend is
disastrous, and so unfulfilling until you both learn
to be willing to be most master.mistress and slave
to one another.
THAT is, in itself, a poem. To learn how to overcome
certain stereotypes and to just embrace the freedom
which intercourse demands . . . As you are giving of
yourself you partner in crime has been completely
adsorbed by your vagina, giving into it as would a
slave to his master. When this duel acceptance is
achieved you are only fucking because you can,
afraid of trying things new, and that, my friend is
disastrous, and so unfulfilling until you both learn
to be willing to be most master.mistress and slave
to one another.
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Re: Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
22nd Jul 2016 6:30pm
Lovely long commenting 😊
Love people's own take/thoughts on my writes
Thankyou
Love people's own take/thoughts on my writes
Thankyou
Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
22nd Jul 2016 10:52pm
Ah yes the moment
Funny how it leaves the deepest impression
Not the thrust, the proud erection, the yielding
The infinite moment
Lovely write
Funny how it leaves the deepest impression
Not the thrust, the proud erection, the yielding
The infinite moment
Lovely write
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Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
23rd Jul 2016 5:33am
One should talk together about such happy moments taking time to be reminiscent each having their moment to explain just how it moved them rather than letting occasions of happiness just to get lost and forgotten
Not moments you'd want to forget too easily
Lol I have it all logged down in my head regarding happy thoughts
Not moments you'd want to forget too easily
Lol I have it all logged down in my head regarding happy thoughts
Re. Good Girl Bad Girl
23rd Jul 2016 7:43am
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23rd Jul 2016 8:15am