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Hope
hopes are baits
on fishing rods
borrowed by the farmer
to entice the donkey
hopes are thoughts
of a better tomorrow
rain for the wheat
water for the horses
hopes are faith
that jumping down the spring board
One land on water not concrete
and have a joyous swim
hopes are bouquets
of tenacity perseverance
will power to continue
where some give up
Hope.
-this is not an entry-
on fishing rods
borrowed by the farmer
to entice the donkey
hopes are thoughts
of a better tomorrow
rain for the wheat
water for the horses
hopes are faith
that jumping down the spring board
One land on water not concrete
and have a joyous swim
hopes are bouquets
of tenacity perseverance
will power to continue
where some give up
Hope.
-this is not an entry-
Published 19th Jul 2016
| Edited 7th Mar 2021
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19th Jul 2016 7:39am
Love that first stanza, as usual it is well written with crystal images. Great pen Grace!
I do have a small question... I notice you do not generally use punctuation or capitalized letters which does makes you poetry easy to read, but I noticed that 'One' In the line "One land on water not concrete" and at the end the final word "Hope" The first letters are capitalized, I just wondered if this was intentional? If so what the ideal behind it is, I found it interesting.
~anonshadow😏
I do have a small question... I notice you do not generally use punctuation or capitalized letters which does makes you poetry easy to read, but I noticed that 'One' In the line "One land on water not concrete" and at the end the final word "Hope" The first letters are capitalized, I just wondered if this was intentional? If so what the ideal behind it is, I found it interesting.
~anonshadow😏
19th Jul 2016 12:53pm
Hi anonshadow:) thank you for reading ...you have a keen eye. Hope is the main focus therefore capital H...One is me. I hope that makes sense.
Anonymous
19th Jul 2016 5:15pm
Grace,
you are the One with a firm grasp on Hope. Enjoyed this spring board of a write :-)
tornado
you are the One with a firm grasp on Hope. Enjoyed this spring board of a write :-)
tornado
Hi Tornado
I fell on concrete many times though...:-) at times when the pool of Hope run out of water...thanks for reading me.
I fell on concrete many times though...:-) at times when the pool of Hope run out of water...thanks for reading me.
Anonymous
19th Jul 2016 11:50pm
Falling is what I do best these days...hamburger ain't got nothing on my knees lol So when you fall, look around, I'll probably already be down there :-)
20th Jul 2016 6:52am
19th Jul 2016 9:30pm
Love your views of hope Grace. Too me it's a matter of faith, wishing for the confidence to take that dive, or leap. Giving up is not an option. Not yet, anyway.
20th Jul 2016 6:54am
Hi Crowfly.:) oyes. Its not an option, one need to go forward. Hope is always coupled with faith...that's so true.
