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Hugging Your Smile
I lay me down to see you in my slumber
with one last gaze upon your picture
moving your screen smile closer to mine
we are now chest to breasts as one
lips quivering together in anticipation
of a sweet passionate night long kiss
hearts vibrating under each other's flesh
as our luving souls spiritually embrace
my earthly skin drips with beads of sweat
I awaken briefly still hugging your smile
feeling as if you've reached thru it
and touched me as if you're physically here
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
with one last gaze upon your picture
moving your screen smile closer to mine
we are now chest to breasts as one
lips quivering together in anticipation
of a sweet passionate night long kiss
hearts vibrating under each other's flesh
as our luving souls spiritually embrace
my earthly skin drips with beads of sweat
I awaken briefly still hugging your smile
feeling as if you've reached thru it
and touched me as if you're physically here
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 3:41am
Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 4:50am
Thank you Ahavati.......glad you enjoyed this one.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 3:53am
once again you soulful poetry lady flowery where ever uu b ur poetry is lovely now on line u i c
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 4:52am
Hi Again....glad you like this soulful piece......thank you.....i c u too....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
Anonymous
19th Jul 2016 4:17am
What a lovely write, flower.
I want to snuggle in now🌼🌹🌷🌺
I want to snuggle in now🌼🌹🌷🌺
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 4:53am
Hey Mom....it is late and time to snuggle......thank you.....good night......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 4:25am
Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 4:55am
Hi Ed......an honor to see your smile upon my page......glad you liked those lines.....I think the ending is the most touching at times.....appreciate you.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
Anonymous
19th Jul 2016 4:31am
Sometimes dreaming the dream is easier than the reality of the void...if only the nights were longer and the days shorter.
This is so beautiful and tender Flower.
This is so beautiful and tender Flower.
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 4:58am
Hi Vee......I luv your thoughts here......you're so true in your words......dreams feel voids not always physically possible to fix.....I'm all for longer nights......yes yes.....honored by your visit.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 5:07am
inspirational soulful and lovely are the manures of your poetry i seed with in my mind words such lovely give or share words which are used rarely we will compose poetry truly which will enervate the souls and make a couple man and gal feel simple and whole as he stand and she approaches his pole life's mission life's goal devour will two loving soull here its like a piece of cake on the site i post sexy of this i shall make else only 2 or three will read me all guys 300 will hold it! safely shake when I will
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
20th Jul 2016 4:25am
Hey Again......thank you for a cool comment......glad you found inspiration in this one......enjoyed your response.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
Anonymous
19th Jul 2016 7:29am
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
20th Jul 2016 4:34am
HI EW......I see you felt I between the lines as well......thank you for your gracious words......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 1:40pm
"of a sweet passionate night long kiss"
Oh dear me yes, that kiss which last all night long!
Beautifully said, and exquisitely rendered making
me smile and look toward the future. Wonderfully
rendered, graciously received. Great poetry . . .
Oh dear me yes, that kiss which last all night long!
Beautifully said, and exquisitely rendered making
me smile and look toward the future. Wonderfully
rendered, graciously received. Great poetry . . .
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 3:56am
Awe SG.....you make me blush......thank you for your sacred words.......I'm happy this gives hope to the future for you......I beleive all things can be achieved if we open the light within our souls.......appreciate you very much.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 2:00pm
Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 3:57am
Kavik you never fail to make me smile......thank you my friend.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Jul 2016 6:22pm
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 3:59am
Welcome to DU and my page......thank you for smiling upon my ink.....glad you enjoyed it......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 9:36pm
Shows what a lovely imagination you've got Flower. You can hug his smile while he's away, then treat it to a kiss when he returns. My favorite stanza:
"hearts vibrating under each other's flesh
as our luving souls spiritually embrace
my earthly skin drips with beads of sweat"
Both spiritual and sensual, a fine and luving balance. Huggs back to you sweet Flower!
"hearts vibrating under each other's flesh
as our luving souls spiritually embrace
my earthly skin drips with beads of sweat"
Both spiritual and sensual, a fine and luving balance. Huggs back to you sweet Flower!
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 4:03am
Hey Crow......what a beautiful response you leave me as usual......you give me such encouragement with your words and smile.....thrilled those lines touched you......sending purple luv & hugs your way xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
19th Jul 2016 11:26pm
I feel like i could hug this poem..
This is so sweet
You sure live up to your namesake Flower..
This is so sweet
You sure live up to your namesake Flower..
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 4:08am
Awe Naajir.......I luv hugs......hug my words anytime my friend......I'm honored by your thoughts......you make me feel like a beautiful blooming flower being kissed by the rain.....thank you.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
20th Jul 2016 4:26am
U KNOCK ME OFF EVERY NOW AND THEN
as a following kind
If I am intruding
I won't post any comment flower lady
u have the art of poetry making
soulful may be
as a following kind
If I am intruding
I won't post any comment flower lady
u have the art of poetry making
soulful may be
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 4:10am
Hey Again......not sure what you're intruding on but I don't think so.......thank you for your support......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
20th Jul 2016 6:28pm
Yup, Naj. Head the nail on the head...you DO live up to your pen name! This was as sweet as cherry pie with ice cream on the side lol
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 4:15am
Awe Poet always with sweet supporting words......thank you.....I'm glad I uplift my name......appreciate you my sacred friend.......now how bout sharing that sundae?? Purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 4:15am
aw lovely Flower you poetry shines loving light into the darkest of days :)
love you..
xoxo Crim
love you..
xoxo Crim
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
21st Jul 2016 4:25am
Precious Crim......I was just thinking about you and left your page to make sure I smiled upon your last ink.......thank you for your touching words......glad you felt light in this.....I'm truly humbled......sending back heart felt luv & hugs your way xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
22nd Jul 2016 1:10am
a beautiful way of dealing with separation - beautiful words and feelings :-)
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Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
22nd Jul 2016 1:29am
Thank you David......always pleased with prescence of your smile.......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
22nd Jul 2016 8:30pm
Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
23rd Jul 2016 4:14am
Thank you Solomon......always a pleasure to see your smile upon my ink.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Hugging Your Smile
3rd Aug 2016 2:38pm
Re: Re. Hugging Your Smile
4th Aug 2016 1:01am
Hey 23.......thank you for blessing me with your smile upon my ink.......honored......purple smiles & hugs xo :)