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Reading You
It’s not that I’m not listening
when my eyes seem far away;
I’m listening to everything about you
except for the words you say.
The who-did-what-when-where-with-whom --
those details never stick,
But how you feel lodges in my heart
and I hear what makes you tick.
If you’d rather I remember
about your uncle’s cousin’s girl
or your neighbor’s dog-sitter
or that movie about the squirrel,
I’ll take notes – I’ll learn the details...
but you're the friend I want to read!
I can’t get enough of your forest
but don’t care much about the trees.
So, sorry if I’m weak on the setting and the plot --
characters are always where I focus all my thought.
when my eyes seem far away;
I’m listening to everything about you
except for the words you say.
The who-did-what-when-where-with-whom --
those details never stick,
But how you feel lodges in my heart
and I hear what makes you tick.
If you’d rather I remember
about your uncle’s cousin’s girl
or your neighbor’s dog-sitter
or that movie about the squirrel,
I’ll take notes – I’ll learn the details...
but you're the friend I want to read!
I can’t get enough of your forest
but don’t care much about the trees.
So, sorry if I’m weak on the setting and the plot --
characters are always where I focus all my thought.
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