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Hopeless
I've always been romantic, hopeless
Sought for love, that's selfless
One thatd leave me a mess
Various sort of welcomed distress
So long as they linger epic feelings of
Endless nights dancing
Glances shared ( we talk with our eyes)
Laughter amongst two genuine souls
Strength in pairs (you and I)
Body language ( expressions of pure desire)
Shared prayers, fears and dreams
And of course
Sacred energies
United bodies
Pleading screams
Graphic scenes
Multiple creams
Harmony upon intrusion
Countless eternities
And the pure satisfaction
That you will be the only one
I'd share my love with
All thanks due to me
~Signed your hopeless romantic
Sought for love, that's selfless
One thatd leave me a mess
Various sort of welcomed distress
So long as they linger epic feelings of
Endless nights dancing
Glances shared ( we talk with our eyes)
Laughter amongst two genuine souls
Strength in pairs (you and I)
Body language ( expressions of pure desire)
Shared prayers, fears and dreams
And of course
Sacred energies
United bodies
Pleading screams
Graphic scenes
Multiple creams
Harmony upon intrusion
Countless eternities
And the pure satisfaction
That you will be the only one
I'd share my love with
All thanks due to me
~Signed your hopeless romantic
Published 16th Jul 2016
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16th Jul 2016 4:59pm
The images excite me. The last line is a signature as if a letter, which is fine,but I'd have a first line that told me that in some way.
16th Jul 2016 11:22pm
Drsam,
You're feedback is more than aporeciated. Thank you for the input too, and I most certainly can see it that way as well:)
You're feedback is more than aporeciated. Thank you for the input too, and I most certainly can see it that way as well:)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2016 7:16pm
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a hopeless romantic
is always full of hopeful sentiments..
not a bad place to be at all..
forever open to the beauty in life
and the possibilities of love..
is always full of hopeful sentiments..
not a bad place to be at all..
forever open to the beauty in life
and the possibilities of love..
21st Jul 2016 10:20pm
"And of course
Sacred energies
United bodies
Pleading screams
Graphic scenes
Multiple creams
Harmony upon intrusion
Countless eternities
And the pure satisfaction
That you will be the only one
I'd share my love with" <--- OMG! You weaved this passage just beautifully! I love the tenderness of your soul...xo
Sacred energies
United bodies
Pleading screams
Graphic scenes
Multiple creams
Harmony upon intrusion
Countless eternities
And the pure satisfaction
That you will be the only one
I'd share my love with" <--- OMG! You weaved this passage just beautifully! I love the tenderness of your soul...xo
21st Jul 2016 10:24pm
You make me blush with warmth and joy,
Its more than a privelege to have your feedback. I thank you for your support always beautiful. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it😘
Its more than a privelege to have your feedback. I thank you for your support always beautiful. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it😘
21st Jul 2016 10:31pm
Well you may have guessed I a bit hopeless myself lol... Yea, easily could be describing me all day!!
Expressively lovely! :)
Expressively lovely! :)
21st Jul 2016 10:38pm
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24th Jul 2016 4:00am
Dee,
Wow, I'm so elated that you liked this piece. I'm more than appreciative for your kind feedback and support. Thank you so much!!
Wow, I'm so elated that you liked this piece. I'm more than appreciative for your kind feedback and support. Thank you so much!!
