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For Jack's "Triolet" challenge.

As hills roll by aboard the train
I think of you with deep regret
joyous smiling my lips do feign
As hills roll by aboard the train
wind mocks lone church's weather vane
empty silence when last we met
As hills roll by aboard the train
I think of you with deep regret

Triolet by DB (07/20/2011)
Darkbee
Written by Darkbee (DB)
Published | Edited 22nd Jul 2011
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