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As It Dies
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As It Dies,
She Burns In My Flame,
As It Died;
In A Brilliant Haze Of Color,
Flying Off Into A World Of Experience
And Amazed
As What Was Left Behind
Before I Knew How To Live
With Tenderness
Or To Be Satisfied;
```~~~... ... ...~~~```
As It Dies,
She Burns In My Flame,
As It Died;
In A Brilliant Haze Of Color,
Flying Off Into A World Of Experience
And Amazed
As What Was Left Behind
Before I Knew How To Live
With Tenderness
Or To Be Satisfied;
```~~~... ... ...~~~```
Published 12th Jul 2016
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12th Jul 2016 9:27am
16th Jul 2016 11:02pm
Hades; hows it goin brother... Always good to see you around... Sorry for the delay in reply, got a few that am working on, of the same style, but darker... What you been working on mine friend: Eddie / wolf
12th Jul 2016 10:57pm
16th Jul 2016 11:03pm
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
12th Mar 2017 12:01pm
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14th Mar 2017 3:55am
Hello AEMelia; how are ya, really dig your comment man, very right on, thank you... This particular write is something that started in me, to try and capture the write in multiple formats, in stead of just one, as I have always done... Was really a simple straight forward write, with the aspect of spoke word and video added... Thank you once again: deadwold
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14th Mar 2017 8:43am
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