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Beneath My Skin
paint your tenderness upon my soul
brush strokes of luv I yearn to feel
colors of you and me shimmering
add luving color to my smile
make me feel a fire orange flamed sun
upon white foamed emerald waves
let me smell a fresh fragrant purple rose
with each breath as I deeply inhale
the aroma of your presence within me
precious scent of our fresh painted luv
as you dip your bristles in lavender passion
touching the canvas of my heart so softly
gazing at my reflection upon crystal clear ripples
I can feel all that we are spiritually
while colors of us embrace beneath my skin
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
brush strokes of luv I yearn to feel
colors of you and me shimmering
add luving color to my smile
make me feel a fire orange flamed sun
upon white foamed emerald waves
let me smell a fresh fragrant purple rose
with each breath as I deeply inhale
the aroma of your presence within me
precious scent of our fresh painted luv
as you dip your bristles in lavender passion
touching the canvas of my heart so softly
gazing at my reflection upon crystal clear ripples
I can feel all that we are spiritually
while colors of us embrace beneath my skin
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Beneath My Skin
12th Jul 2016 2:36am
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15th Jul 2016 3:32am
Hey SG...glad you enjoyed the glow and felt the colors.......this was a fun write......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Beneath My Skin
15th Jul 2016 3:35am
Kavik my precious friend....always bringing a smile to my heart.....thank you....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
12th Jul 2016 3:11am
beautiful words wit a beautiful picture
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Re: Re. Beneath My Skin
15th Jul 2016 3:36am
Hi SG.....glad you enjoyed this all the way around.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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12th Jul 2016 5:08am
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Re: Re. Beneath My Skin
15th Jul 2016 3:37am
Hi EW.....I'm glad you liked this.....thank you for smiling upon my ink.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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Hi Sista......I'm sure he will......you have seen his talent in painting......beautiful inspiration.....thank you always for luv and support......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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15th Jul 2016 3:40am
Re. Beneath My Skin
12th Jul 2016 2:10pm
lovely Flower you have painted this poem beautiful like you dear lady..
love Crim
love Crim
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15th Jul 2016 3:41am
Precious Crim......your beautiful words make my heart smile......you're a blessing......thank you for showing me much luv and support......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Beneath My Skin
12th Jul 2016 8:27pm
Really loving this ink - so beautifully painted in colourful words, the poem has a warm glow about it which grows with every read :-)
many ehugs on their way for this one :-)
many ehugs on their way for this one :-)
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Re: Re. Beneath My Skin
15th Jul 2016 3:44am
Thank you David for showing so much luv upon this ink......happy it warmly glows and hope it grows more on you......purple luv & ehugs back at ya xo :)
Re. Beneath My Skin
13th Jul 2016 5:52pm
the softness with which a lover paints his love makes a silent girl shiver she does not know what the touch could do ever as he just touched her canvas too soft gentle and perfumed he must have the pen of a man likely to stand to enable vibrations enter through one's body canvas at an appropriate angle to pierce the soul and let it bleed in agony cosummating orgasm if such a painting a man could behold he is not just a painter old experienced in the art of love which he alone can partake with his canvas skinned love flowers may shower upon two such souls however ..your poetry flowery a painter invokes
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15th Jul 2016 3:47am
Wow Again...pretty deep words you leave upon my ink......thank you for your deep thoughts here.....by the way.....he is a painter in real life.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Beneath My Skin
14th Jul 2016 00:25am
I'd say you're a masterpiece sweet Flower.
'precious scent of our fresh painted luv
as you dip your bristles in lavender passion
touching the canvas of my heart so softly"
Your love might be an artist and, if so, you would be both muse and model. I see your passion is lavender, not purple. The color of a beautiful and unique poet.
'precious scent of our fresh painted luv
as you dip your bristles in lavender passion
touching the canvas of my heart so softly"
Your love might be an artist and, if so, you would be both muse and model. I see your passion is lavender, not purple. The color of a beautiful and unique poet.
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15th Jul 2016 3:52am
Hi Crow.....very touched by your words......honored you think this a "masterpiece"......humbly tipping my pen to you in gratitude......yes he is an artist.....I have the pleasure of owning 2 of his gorgeous paintings he created just for me......appreciate you always.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Beneath My Skin
14th Jul 2016 9:44pm
The picture so fits the poem if (as I do) the viewer discerns the shape of a naked woman's torso, back to the viewer. Inspired this rhyming comment:
I see through purple sunset's palms,
A woman of curvaceous charms
Standing demure with folded arms;
A view that both excites and calms.
I see through purple sunset's palms,
A woman of curvaceous charms
Standing demure with folded arms;
A view that both excites and calms.
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Awe SS......you're such a romantic soul......I luv your poetic response.......thank you for sharing your creative imagination in your vision of the pic......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Beneath My Skin
18th Jul 2016 7:05pm
Stunningly beautiful this poem is my favorite one of your poems and it went on my reading list first thing. Excellent work!
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19th Jul 2016 3:50am
Awe Faith my precious friend......thank you for your beaitiful smile and words upon my ink......honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)