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air

alive
but only just there
not quite drowning
but gasping for air.

Written by lives_and_lies

(opal)

Published 11th Jul 2016 | Edited 8th Nov 2017

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Re. Air

12th Jul 2016 6:55am

I can relate too this completely. Short and sweet, fantastic piece.

~anonshadow😏

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Re. Air

12th Jul 2016 9:01pm

Sounds like me after a kickboxing session. Cool piece.

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