Real Man

Precious Crim......how beautiful this is......those lines ~"see I'm not beautiful.....I never wanted you to know that"~ sorry Crim you gave that secret up from the first write to this one how beautiful your heart and soul is......wonderful write.....enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you so much lovely Flower..

just feeling a bit low about myself today I guess.. you made me feel better and brought a smile to my face thank you :)

love Crim

thank you Adam for the uplifting comment :)

love Crim

"fearing what you will see in me"

He will see the beauty inside of you and
more than that he will see your physical
beauty of which you are much too critical of.

aw Jerry you read between the lines I am hard on myself about my physical beauty.. thank you I cherish your thoughts..

love Brenda

I swear you're an extension
of my reflection.


ladyloves I'm holding on tight
to you in meaningful  silence,  
because this is... this swooning

lovely Malady you moved my greatly tender soul with your comment.. thank you :)

love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia it is a deep connection indeed..

love Crim

The very fact that you can see it as you do, ponder and feel it so deeply, and write this awesome poetry is testament plenty that you give so much and are deeply beautiful xx
Lovely ink, reaches in and takes hold.
Thank you dear one

thank you deeply lovely Miki for such a beautiful and loving comment..

love Brenda

a fantasy can be very real,
& the real only an illusion.
always beautiful in your poetry, Crim...

John thank you for such a great comment :)

love Crim

I've trespassed in a sacred place
leaving my dirty footprints
taking without ever giving back
 
I see the real you
while I cower in the shadows
fearing what you will see in me

Wow Gobsmacked!
I love this...
i feel you Boo
loves you sis always..
Jackie
((((((((((((((((Brenda)))))))))))))))))))  xoxoxox

aw Jackie thank you so much beautiful lady.. love you too :)

love Brenda

This is so beautiful, YOU love, are so beautiful. We are here to see our souls, as soiled as they may seem. I'm glad to have encountered your soul, everyone's on here. I wish I could show you all how beautiful you are! This ink, this love , this real, this you that you have shared... your immutable allure... breathtaking.

oh David thank you with all my heart for such an endearing comment.. you really moved me as you do so with your poetry :)

love Crim

He sounds like an ideal lover, one you fully deserve Crim.

your ferocity frightens me
your gentleness make me tremble

An alpha male (or Master?) will fight for you 'til death or hold you tenderly as the situation requires.  I disagree that you have nothing to offer in return.  You've got talent, imagination and style.  So I wouldn't worry at all about what he'll see in you.  He might spot your darkly beautiful soul.  Loved this Crim!  
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thank you graciously Sir Crow for shining a light on the beauty you see in my style :)

love Crim

Oh god... To be the one you wrote this for... Wow, it's easily the most soul searin, n baring ink from you yet... Wow...

Poe thank you most deeply I cherish your thoughts my friend :)

love Crim

Remarkable !!!!

Like

thank you Poet you're dear to me..

love Brenda

always you astound
Your verity and measure
Dirt that you've gowned
And your delicate lessor
Vision is blind
Sacred the soul
Scribe of this shrine
Poetics console
Realities presence
A journeyed affair
Beauties acceptances
The Conscience impair 😉

Nothing more beautiful than the barren soul. To know oneself... Accepted vulnerability

So many treasures in the underground, yet we all struggle demons

<3 Dkruie

thank you Dkruie I loved you poetic comment..

love Crim

Brenda, beauty's not what we touch or see... It's what we feel. We are artists... We're all over critical, self centered, insecure, obsessive, neurotic, eccentric, full of love, emotion and passion  
 
But that's what makes us the most beautiful.  
 
To live a life where our passions are absent... Well that's just down right ugly😉  
 
Love and respect sweet Crimson  
<3 David

thank you graciously Dkruie for those words of wisdom..

love Crim

You underestimate yourself Brenda,  you are more beautiful than you realize or see yourself in the mirror and all the commentators before me are witnesses to that fact.
But given the nature of attraction through poetry, i understand it too well. Poetry world is a bubble with its own tone and colors which pulls us in with such gravity...but regardless of the positive or negative aspect, it certainly gives us our muse to write about.
I'm sure your muse knows more than you realize..:)

thank you Rina you've given me much to think about.. you may be right he just might see me all to clearly..

love Brenda

Don't be hard on yourself, lady Crim. You're one of most beautiful souls I've ever come across. Anyone can see that or they are blind. But no matter how beautiful you are it's the things we can't have that we want the most.

thank you my Darkest Lord Hades your comment touched my heart deeply..

forever in darkness Crim

Brenda, you have been exposing yourself here for a very long time. Trust me, he knows you through your words. The eyes of poets see beyond what even Kryptonians can see... this is a wonderful verse!
JJ

thank you so much JJ I'm sure you're right..

love Brenda

beautiful, beautiful lines - where is the love, where is the truth - this poem buried itself deeply into my mind, had me asking so many questions about myself and the others around me - really affected me today and I am not entirely sure why :-)

you're such a master of the verse :-) (sending you love and many ehugs :-)

thank you David you moved me greatly with your comment hugs you tightly back..

love Brenda

Brenda, the potency of your emotions leaps off the page. Such a heavy heart displayed in this ink.
Beautiful agony! xo

thank you lovely Rain..

love Brenda

I see the real you in this poem. It's very pure of a poem.
Love it 😁

aw thank you graciously DC..

love Crim

Wow real nice and truth, we all seem to hide, I guess it's fear.

thank you most kindly Jose yeah it's fear..

I fear what he makes me feel already being with someone else..

love Crim

there is such
naked vulnerability herein...
... i understand this
unrequited longing so much
but know that the illusion
is often safer
than touching the truth
xo

thank you beautiful Katja yes it burns to lust and not be sated but venturing to far out is terrifying to me..

love to you lady..

xoxo Brenda

Todski some interesting pondering making me think about this write in a new light.. I think it's a little of both fear of rejection and fear of losing my perfect fantasy.. thank you for your gracious comment.. hope you come back..

love Crim

Brenda.. this is so beautiful, as are you.. inside and out.. i'm sure this lucky soul, knows that.. baring your soul on this one, and i love it.. love always..




Dave

thank you my dear friend Dave for showing me so much love..

love Brenda