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Tetris
You can see it
from the way he puts the words
I
am
hungry
I need to pie
tired
I
am
I
love
you
-when there is no space at the bottom-
Miss M
E
-instead of a simple triple “you”-.
You can see it
from the way he puts his needs
he never played Tetris in his life.
from the way he puts the words
I
am
hungry
I need to pie
tired
I
am
I
love
you
-when there is no space at the bottom-
Miss M
E
-instead of a simple triple “you”-.
You can see it
from the way he puts his needs
he never played Tetris in his life.
Published 8th Jul 2016
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19th Jul 2016 1:22pm
Unusual and brilliant
haha! ooh this is
way too clever.. .
I absolutely love
the wiring of your
mind.
it is beyond fused
material,
-Howlings
haha! ooh this is
way too clever.. .
I absolutely love
the wiring of your
mind.
it is beyond fused
material,
-Howlings
20th Jul 2016 9:21am
Thank you Howlings!
You always make my day with your comments :))
Glad you enjoyed it. In my mind you can play tetris for sure! lol! :)
Kiss,
Art
You always make my day with your comments :))
Glad you enjoyed it. In my mind you can play tetris for sure! lol! :)
Kiss,
Art
Anonymous
5th Aug 2016 8:29pm
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8th Aug 2016 4:49pm
Thank you for reading and comment Nemo :))
This poem is a game indeed. It can be played as you like, the important thing is to be played ;)
This poem is a game indeed. It can be played as you like, the important thing is to be played ;)
25th Aug 2016 5:00pm
25th Aug 2016 10:12pm
