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another double whammy ....save me
poetry is the hay today
Beautiful sensuous poetry
and
one feels the quietude
of lust and love
you convey
but of that some other day
let me now post my last poetry
of the day
We will never be......
The surfs....
the tides are so different...
you are the high one...
and I, as the ebbing away....
low may I now say...
but come some day ....
one day ...
we may meet across the lake...
far from each...
perhaps that day
is not far away,
I beseech....
You are the epitome of poetry....
I an enigma only...
come now purple one ....
just read my poetry
and
let me not to the machinations of the world succumb....
I am now frail and crumb..
almost cold and numb
Beautiful sensuous poetry
and
one feels the quietude
of lust and love
you convey
but of that some other day
let me now post my last poetry
of the day
We will never be......
The surfs....
the tides are so different...
you are the high one...
and I, as the ebbing away....
low may I now say...
but come some day ....
one day ...
we may meet across the lake...
far from each...
perhaps that day
is not far away,
I beseech....
You are the epitome of poetry....
I an enigma only...
come now purple one ....
just read my poetry
and
let me not to the machinations of the world succumb....
I am now frail and crumb..
almost cold and numb
Published 8th Jul 2016
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8th Jul 2016 5:27am
Hey Again.....this left me sad......you under estimate your poetry......under state yourself......I feel a good soul beneath your skin......one that has a wandering heart.....trying to fit in where you can with others......some take you wrong.....walk away before getting a chance to see the other side of you that you so rarely show.....(I know how that feels.....been that way most of my life).......I have felt this in your soul for a while......thank you for allowing me a glimpse of your other side......I've enjoyed it much......RL for me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Jul 2016 2:39pm
my regards and respects
for those
who speak so kindly
flowerly ur poetry is too purply
most love thee
for your hidden
quality of royalty
in your poetry really
and this is no fallacy
thank you for treating me
as a lamp post
How I wish I could be taller than thee
but my spine is now bent
roses are now
not for love sent
but in hopes
that roses will show
the forgotten paths also
and
when crushed you don't perhaps know
perfume of roses which grow
even dead ones smiles show
in graves
down six feet below
I know!
thanx for the RL again
for those
who speak so kindly
flowerly ur poetry is too purply
most love thee
for your hidden
quality of royalty
in your poetry really
and this is no fallacy
thank you for treating me
as a lamp post
How I wish I could be taller than thee
but my spine is now bent
roses are now
not for love sent
but in hopes
that roses will show
the forgotten paths also
and
when crushed you don't perhaps know
perfume of roses which grow
even dead ones smiles show
in graves
down six feet below
I know!
thanx for the RL again
