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"wiping impossible off  
your sleeve"

I love this line.  Such a small piece of the whole but it's beautiful nonetheless...Truly beautiful write.
Willow

I could've written different variations of this poem after each break up but they all would've sounded the same lol  
This pretty much is a summation of all the men I loved before..(I think there's a song out there by Iglesias :/)

Thank you Willow for liking it, I appreciate your time and comment :)

"confident and tall  
   
in liar's chair  
of December solstice  
red grass defiant  
against madness"

lovely Rina you are true master at conveying emotions..

so talented you are..

love Brenda

We all have degrees of madness and it all depends who sparks them turning it from flame to inferno..
Thank you Brends, I can only try :)

Can't tell you how just the title, affects me deeply. You are so gifted my sweetness...

Ah pikm, I'm hoping this is relatable to all at some level..although, saddens me on how we inflict pain on each other knowingly and unknowingly..

It's terrible how love that begins with a bang ends with a whimper
A cave of melancholy and catharsis indeed

Very fine write

surreal landscape. we feel the fingers
& linger in the melancholy.
it's beauty uninterrupted...

Rina.. this needs music.. these are lyrics to me.. love it..



Dave

Fantastic as usual Vee.
"In liar's chair
of December solstice
red grass defiant
against madness"
Amazing line.

You never cease to impress, thank you for sharing this piece!

Hey Vee......what a great write......emotions up and down....slamming into the soul that has hurt you.....brilliant lines all the way thru......really enjoyed this vent.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)