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purchasing a lover
‘I would not have traded the delights of my suffering
for anything in the world.’ Gabriel Garcia Marquez
sure it’s an addiction. the allure of a sold woman.
a common prostitute, but to me, she is fascinating.
pick-up joints are hit & miss. but as long as I’ve got the
dollars to pay for it, I can always find a whore. & I’ve known
some very good whores.
I’ve known them, I’ve spoken with them. I could tell by her tight
dress how firm & plump her tits were; I’ve wondered if her
nipples became erect when she had sex, if her cunt lubricated
naturally, or if she used something artificial & mendacious.
the discoveries I’ve made, I could write poems about.
and so I do.
there was Marta, of Spanish blood & Gypsy eyes. she ‘suffered’
from an affliction unique among working girls: she was
multi-orgasmic. her pained expression told me she tried to resist it,
even as it sparked like a blown fuse in her perditious enclave. she
gripped me more tightly each time, not to hasten my own explosion,
but because she was under the thrall of her merciless witch-sister.
I told her, ‘you come a lot.’ she said ‘I come too much.’
and those others, beautiful & sexually dynamic. the red-haired
harlot, who undressed her blonde girlfriend in order to incite a
ménage-a-trois. the dark city woman, who let me sleep in her bed
after our sex, while she went back to the bars & the drunken
soldiers. but when she returned, she would not let me fuck her again.
these lurid sexual encounters, I can recall each one, laconic yet
glorious. each pretty whore, as if she never abandoned me…
(Art: Max Autrey)
Published 7th Jul 2016
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Interesting write JohnFeddeler.To speak of the unspoken makes it all so much more interesting.Enjoyable.
7th Jul 2016 6:33am
And walk away she always does because the most important client is her next one...
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jul 2016 6:45am
7th Jul 2016 6:43am
I just love your whoring poeme s,
..mean while, don't know what Im
going to do with you.
I'm flushing with electric jealousy.
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..mean while, don't know what Im
going to do with you.
I'm flushing with electric jealousy.
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7th Jul 2016 8:00am
You are ever so brilliant in the way you write, I'd love to consume a book of it because one minute you peel all the onion layers and we find something vulnerable, confessional and stripped and next all the layers are back on and you give nothing but aggression away. Agonisingly fun to follow.
7th Jul 2016 8:10am
7th Jul 2016 9:10am
7th Jul 2016 9:13am
the broken find solace in picking out the shards of glass from each other's feet and backs, it's hard to forget those who've kissed those wounds, no matter what the price ...
Enjoyed ... Your style is impeccable
Enjoyed ... Your style is impeccable
Anonymous
7th Jul 2016 9:42am
Agree with Lobo. Your style is impeccable. Hmmm. What to do with John.
Smiling with Feddeler.
Smiling with Feddeler.
7th Jul 2016 12:40pm
Proper presentation of the truth is the best poetry
You excel at doing so
You excel at doing so
7th Jul 2016 4:45pm
John the women cast aside by the world embraced and immortalized in you art..
beautiful..
love Crim
beautiful..
love Crim
Anonymous
7th Jul 2016 6:41pm
John, the quote by Garcia Marquez is priceless and very fitting for your piece but i would love to see your take on his book titled, 'Memories of my melancholy whores',
Especially your 8S very reminiscent of that book and I know your version of that story will be equally smashing.
Thank you for writing another beautiful story on broken people.
Especially your 8S very reminiscent of that book and I know your version of that story will be equally smashing.
Thank you for writing another beautiful story on broken people.
7th Jul 2016 7:03pm
7th Jul 2016 7:38pm
Priceless work sir. The hookers I've known and loved haven't been this exotic but they've done the job. Each was unforgettable in their respective way. I was particularly fond of Coco..
7th Jul 2016 9:40pm
Desillusional facts, your language tough but always with a touch of sadnes. I love your style, it's so refreshingly open and to the point. So very well done, John!
8th Jul 2016 1:49am
8th Jul 2016 3:12am
Memories of my Melancholy Whores is one of Marquez's best. He would approve this.
Anonymous
11th Jul 2016 6:37pm
Sir John, the word whore can be frowned upon by many but I must tell you, to be included and labeled as such by you would be an honor...
"and those others, beautiful & sexually dynamic."
~ yes please....
With love always - Taryn xoxo
"and those others, beautiful & sexually dynamic."
~ yes please....
With love always - Taryn xoxo
