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Reflective Glass
some days the glass is kind
when I smile upon a reflection
watching a beautiful sunset sky
while I think of my luving Bee
a soul that makes me feel beautiful
feeling our hearts beating as one
such passion flows thru my veins
with just a simple thought of him
smiling more for being so blessed
other days my eyes fill with tears
as they drip upon my sad reflection
watching dark clouds as Angels weep
feel so much pain thru souls I luv dearly
knowing that I can't change a thing
but can pray and weep with them
when they tell me their sad trials of life
not knowing what tomorrow may bring
smiles from a sacred luv or devastation
each look into the reflective glass ~
I'm different
Inspiration ~ "The Mirror Doesn't Lie"
Crafted by "Deborah Evans"
when I smile upon a reflection
watching a beautiful sunset sky
while I think of my luving Bee
a soul that makes me feel beautiful
feeling our hearts beating as one
such passion flows thru my veins
with just a simple thought of him
smiling more for being so blessed
other days my eyes fill with tears
as they drip upon my sad reflection
watching dark clouds as Angels weep
feel so much pain thru souls I luv dearly
knowing that I can't change a thing
but can pray and weep with them
when they tell me their sad trials of life
not knowing what tomorrow may bring
smiles from a sacred luv or devastation
each look into the reflective glass ~
I'm different
Inspiration ~ "The Mirror Doesn't Lie"
Crafted by "Deborah Evans"
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2nd Jul 2016 3:05pm
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4th Jul 2016 1:58am
Hey Faith.......thank you my sacred friend......good to see your smile back on my ink.....glad you enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Jul 2016 3:07pm
You are a giving soul, flower. To have someone like you
means the world to know that there is someone out there
who cares.
means the world to know that there is someone out there
who cares.
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4th Jul 2016 2:05am
Hey SG.......I always appreciate your graceful words to me.......thank you for making me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Jul 2016 3:08pm
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4th Jul 2016 2:06am
Awe PS.....what a blessing to see your smile upon my ink......thank you so much.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2016 3:28pm
Flower it's true ,in all the chaos of this crazy world.
You snap people back to reminding them what a beautiful world is out there.
And , why not you? To be as blessed as you are with love. At least you appreciate what you have.
You always pay forward. Compliments, advice, laughter. That's what you do for me.
Chin up beautiful.
You are allowed to be human and have a bad day.
Peace my dear friend. 🌼🌺🌻🌹🌷🌸💐
You snap people back to reminding them what a beautiful world is out there.
And , why not you? To be as blessed as you are with love. At least you appreciate what you have.
You always pay forward. Compliments, advice, laughter. That's what you do for me.
Chin up beautiful.
You are allowed to be human and have a bad day.
Peace my dear friend. 🌼🌺🌻🌹🌷🌸💐
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4th Jul 2016 2:12am
How precious are your words to me Mom.......I feel very emotional after reading your response.......I'm actually speechless......you've made my heart feel warm.......thank you my friend.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Jul 2016 3:44pm
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4th Jul 2016 2:14am
Hey Jade......what an honor to have you leave a smile upon my ink......glad you enjoyed......thank you for feeling my soul......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Jul 2016 6:06pm
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4th Jul 2016 2:17am
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6th Jul 2016 9:40am
I'm adept at composing softer poetry ew read me i collapse in anxiety what a time wasted so I revert to the screen where once i have been now growing kids do the same things guys specially where I have been but nder the lonesome darkness at night gone unseen but now 'tis different flowery I am lost in between yesterday and today have you that not in me seen then let me know where have you been To wash rooms so it seems when guys imagine me in theri dreams tissue please
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7th Jul 2016 00:38am
Awe Again I'm so sorry......I don't come on site for days sometimes....i didn't see yours.....I have commented on them now as you can see......I will try to be more alert......I work 3 jobs thru out the day most the time......so I can't always get on.......I do apologize......I think your last writes are awesome......have a blessed night.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Reflective Glass
2nd Jul 2016 8:26pm
I could see through your words as they reflected love, passion and sadness - truly a beautiful write and an easy add :-)
such a beautiful write :-)
such a beautiful write :-)
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4th Jul 2016 2:40am
Yay David!!! Thank you for looking deeper within me here.......appreciate you feeling me......honored by the RL add on.......purple luv & hugs always xo :)
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2016 1:34pm
So true, Give thanks every day!
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4th Jul 2016 2:42am
Hey SlowG........I do give thanks everyday to feel the luv and even hurt from it......reminds me of how blessed I am on both sides.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Jul 2016 6:52pm
Just goes to show what a tender heart you have Flower. You celebrate the good times filled with luv but lament the darker days when your Bunny's feeling down. I'm sure you're cherished as a friend, lover and companion. I've seen you from both sides now. Remarkable work Flower!
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4th Jul 2016 2:49am
Hey Crow.......thank you for seeing me inside my words......I cherish very much the luv that has come my way.......that I have friends who trust me and believe in me.......it humbles me that another soul would need me......I always appreciate you're words to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Jul 2016 8:18pm
Haha Sista......sound good to me......hand me a Bud Light Lime......yummy......thanks for the share of your smile......purple ouv & hugs xo :)
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5th Jul 2016 12:53pm
Soft and beautiful. ...
Your words are filled with so much hope... just lovely
Your words are filled with so much hope... just lovely
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7th Jul 2016 00:40am
Thank you Naajir......I always am pleased when you stop by......will visit you soon.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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5th Jul 2016 4:09pm
Oh the reflection in the glass does change, funny how that is..... At times we morph into other's and see thier reflection because we feel their pain and empathy takes hold and we watch as our reflection fades away... We then long to help them, heal them because we can also then heal and help ourselves.... There is a positive and negative to empathy.... nice.
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7th Jul 2016 00:59am
Hi Savvy......so nice to see you once again upon my page.......you're so right......I've been an empath for a long time....never knew that till I met one here on site......thank you for your sharing such great insight with me....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Jul 2016 7:34am
Another great write by flower girl! I have loved all poems you have done so meny of them are so pretty
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7th Jul 2016 1:08am
Welcome to DU Baby!! I thank you for taking time to visiting my page.......I'm so glad you have liked my ink....I weite what I feel deep within me......appreciate you.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2016 7:42pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, the most wonderful thing about you and this write is it shows your selflessness...it's a quality that sadly appears to be hard pressed to find these days in so many....you are appreciated and loved and rightfully so....With love - Sweet S xo :)
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17th Jul 2016 4:26am
Sweet S......your words touch me so very much.......I wish that none of us felt any pain from life......but we do......thank you once again for bringing tears to my heart.......you sweet Lady are appreciated and luved by many as you always greet others with luv.......purple luv & hugs xo :)