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Let's Elope
Enough restraints
enough disdains
all we've borne
is pain and pain
I say my dear
let's just elope
no mirrors to rear
it's time for hope!
Let's begin anew
time the birds flew
no more cliches
we just run through!
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© KDAmB 2016 All rights reserved.
Published 1st Jul 2016
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1st Jul 2016 4:36pm
Yesss! Runaway with me, and when you tire of me, Run, run away with them! Love and Peace, may the adventure never cease!
1st Jul 2016 8:19pm
Lol! Thanks bro for taking the time to read and also for such awesome poetic comments... It's hard to be a peace when you're in love though!! This was written to remind myself my old days!
Cheers
KDAmB
Cheers
KDAmB
2nd Jul 2016 7:11pm
love doesn't always lead to contentment - but then eloping is not such a bad idea :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
3rd Jul 2016 00:16am
yes Dave it surely doesn't... and that contentment is the key to happiness they say... yes eloping is not a bad idea... for a time atleast!
Thank You for your kind appreciation Dave! So glad to see you here!!
:-)
KDAmB
Thank You for your kind appreciation Dave! So glad to see you here!!
:-)
KDAmB
12th Jul 2016 9:01pm
13th Jul 2016 4:19am
5th Oct 2016 3:00pm
Well I'm convinced. 🌌 Another great write that put a smile on my face that is. I've been hitting random poems to know your writing better... I'm loving your lyrical tones. :) good stuff.
5th Oct 2016 4:01pm
Sometimes it does help a lot looking into our past to appreciate our present, this is one such scribble for self. I welcome your kind gesture Pisha! truly appreciate your generous and kind appreciation of my random spillages. Thank You is a small phrase indeed!!
kind regards
KDAmB
kind regards
KDAmB
