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Premeditated Love
I can be forcible and hard
I can be easy and pleasurable
my carnal rhythm designed for the far side of
satisfaction then back again
enjoyable . . . scrumptious
I am there because of love
I adore . . . I love . .
I need
I can devour
Published 30th Jun 2016
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30th Jun 2016 5:34pm
your passion is all consuming in this hot write Jerry!!!
excellent..
love Brenda
excellent..
love Brenda
30th Jun 2016 6:25pm
As Popeye sez . . . . I yam whot I yam . . .
Thank you very much, Brenda, for your achingly sweet comment . . .
Made my day!
Thank you very much, Brenda, for your achingly sweet comment . . .
Made my day!
30th Jun 2016 9:10pm
Thank you, Solomon, appreciate your comments . . .
Don't know if the pic is from a movie, but, yeah, looks like it could
Don't know if the pic is from a movie, but, yeah, looks like it could
1st Jul 2016 2:44pm
Write On!
Sending hugs and kisses your way Jerry love the positiveness in this entire poem..
Love
Jackie xoxoxox
Sending hugs and kisses your way Jerry love the positiveness in this entire poem..
Love
Jackie xoxoxox
1st Jul 2016 3:38pm
Ahhh . . . Thank you, Jackie, for your lovely thoughts
about my little poem, Oooh! Also many thinks for the
"hugs and kisses." Gotta love it . . . and I do!
about my little poem, Oooh! Also many thinks for the
"hugs and kisses." Gotta love it . . . and I do!
