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My Mistake
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My Mistake
At a distance through dawn mist
A rolled up umbrella
Resembles a rifle
Sorry mate
Sorry
Written by
blocat
Published
28th Jun 2016
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Re. My Mistake
RainC_Tara
(rain1courtel)
3rd Jul 2016 10:35pm
HA! Clean those glasses, the blur ain't really whatcha' seeing... xo
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Re: Re. My Mistake
blocat
4th Jul 2016 10:04am
I know It was wet misty morn.A comrade of mine shot some poor bugger on is way to work. We had a dusk til dawn shoot-on-sight curfew in Borneo. The guy was a little early.carrying his brolly like a rifle. Shit happens in wartime sadly.
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