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Poor me...
Poor me...
Nah pour p-pour me
Go ahead and take a sip
I'll watch you owe D
My head is making clouds
I ground, and up more trees
I am LSD
I am heavenly
Come and see you through my eyes
Surprise, nothing for free
I am that random tablet
The one you found in traffic
Go ahead and pop it down
Fuck it, let's see what happens
Find passion in your passage
Extract me and then dab it
I promise it won't hurt
If you can see me, know we damaged
Began this as a man
Now damn, I am a habit
Pure, strong like a brick
Crush half and take a sniff
Praise me for the nod off
God Xan this shit's a trip
Bet that you won't miss
The world of normies
Yeah, Whoa is me
Now pour p-pour me...
Nah pour p-pour me
Go ahead and take a sip
I'll watch you owe D
My head is making clouds
I ground, and up more trees
I am LSD
I am heavenly
Come and see you through my eyes
Surprise, nothing for free
I am that random tablet
The one you found in traffic
Go ahead and pop it down
Fuck it, let's see what happens
Find passion in your passage
Extract me and then dab it
I promise it won't hurt
If you can see me, know we damaged
Began this as a man
Now damn, I am a habit
Pure, strong like a brick
Crush half and take a sniff
Praise me for the nod off
God Xan this shit's a trip
Bet that you won't miss
The world of normies
Yeah, Whoa is me
Now pour p-pour me...
Published 27th Jun 2016
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27th Jun 2016 4:47am
27th Jun 2016 10:58am
Thank you, I have a bunch of writings that I use as breadcrumbs of sorts, to help remind me where I've been. I hope to read, post and contribute overall to this forum. I like what I have seen so far. Anywho thank younfor the read, and please feel free to be brutally honest with critiques, I am told I write well, but everyone can improve everyday. Love and peace.
Anonymous
27th Jun 2016 1:22pm
brutally honest... sure someone can come in and tear apart your versed monsters... but....... we all have our journeys in which we grow. we are our own worst critiques, we challenge oursleves... love your focus and word play
dkruie
dkruie
27th Jun 2016 2:40pm
Thank you, I've always felt it's our ugly that makes us beautiful. Love and peace.
Anonymous
27th Jun 2016 9:40pm
yes indeed a beautiful curse
1st Jul 2016 2:20am
1st Jul 2016 4:07am
Thank you, I try to sometimes, but i am not comfortable with my voice. You guys have some fantastic writings on here, i apologize for not commenting more on others poems, life gets hectic around these parts (all parts I imagine). Tomorrow will hold no new poems, only reads and comments! Be blessed with Peace, love, and some bomb ass grub!
1st Jul 2016 4:10am
I can relate to this poem I've lived this life the waters get deeper if you're not careful..
deep write..
love Crim
deep write..
love Crim
1st Jul 2016 4:32am
Thank you, this was written recently, but depicted a person I used to be, floated to the top of the waters I believe, the sun is warm but I fear my heart stayed cold. I am amazed that i can still speak after some of the things that I was. Peace and love to you.
9th Feb 2019 1:50am
Yeah! Love your voice & your rhythm. And a bit of humor. :)
Great performance. More please!
Great performance. More please!
19th Dec 2019 11:21am
