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Always Near
feel you so deep within me always
we have joined as one body and soul
feeling a never ending spiritual romance
I truly believe your heart beats in my chest
mine in yours feeling each others emotions
of sacred passionate desires of luv
stunning are stars brightening a darkened sky
aligning to write our initials in purple twinkles
upon heavens sacred universe honoring us
how blessed we are to hear Angelic humming
harmonizing with our whispering hearts
such a beautiful night to be inside your hug
while we are apart for an unknown time
look towards the horizon my sweet one
feel my devoted luv in the sunrise or stars
you will be reminded as you see stars shinning
while you hear Angels singing ever so softly
that I'm always a heart beat within you
always near my sweet Bee.....luv ya xoxoxoxo :)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
we have joined as one body and soul
feeling a never ending spiritual romance
I truly believe your heart beats in my chest
mine in yours feeling each others emotions
of sacred passionate desires of luv
stunning are stars brightening a darkened sky
aligning to write our initials in purple twinkles
upon heavens sacred universe honoring us
how blessed we are to hear Angelic humming
harmonizing with our whispering hearts
such a beautiful night to be inside your hug
while we are apart for an unknown time
look towards the horizon my sweet one
feel my devoted luv in the sunrise or stars
you will be reminded as you see stars shinning
while you hear Angels singing ever so softly
that I'm always a heart beat within you
always near my sweet Bee.....luv ya xoxoxoxo :)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Always Near
25th Jun 2016 10:06pm
Ahhh . . . "that I'm always a heart beat within you"
That last line is the unique best in the whole poem.
That is saying a lot, flower, because this poem had
so many great lines, One of your absolute best in
my opinion.
That last line is the unique best in the whole poem.
That is saying a lot, flower, because this poem had
so many great lines, One of your absolute best in
my opinion.
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Re: Re. Always Near
26th Jun 2016 1:02am
Awe SG.....you're melting my heart......thank you for the happy tears dripping on my keyboard......you've touched me my sacred friend.......raising a glass to you......cheers......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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26th Jun 2016 3:31am
Re. Always Near
26th Jun 2016 10:42am
Another very sweetly layered 'blanket' of love covering minds all over with thoughts of a love, so special... Yup, you did it again my friend :)
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Re: Re. Always Near
28th Jun 2016 3:29am
Thank you Poet for feeling this one......definetly a luv that is rare and special......sharing a "blanket of luv" always......honored by your words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Always Near
26th Jun 2016 6:30pm
beautiful Flower such a heavenly love write..
so tender of heart you are..
love you beautiful one..
love Crim
so tender of heart you are..
love you beautiful one..
love Crim
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28th Jun 2016 3:42am
Precious Crim......always luv your smile & luv upon my page......I'm glad my heart showed tender here.....I felt very peaceful and calm hearted writing this one......thank you my friend......purple luv & hugs your way xo :)
Re. Always Near
26th Jun 2016 8:37pm
Romantic. Favourite verse:
how blessed we are to hear Angelic humming
harmonizing with our whispering hearts
such a beautiful night to be inside your hug
I read a poem this afternoon where the theme was very much like this - one heart living in another's - at a Ruby Wedding party to which I was invited by friends who are into poetry, drama and song.
how blessed we are to hear Angelic humming
harmonizing with our whispering hearts
such a beautiful night to be inside your hug
I read a poem this afternoon where the theme was very much like this - one heart living in another's - at a Ruby Wedding party to which I was invited by friends who are into poetry, drama and song.
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Re: Re. Always Near
28th Jun 2016 3:44am
Hey Soloman......so happy you liked throw words most.......I really felt amazing as I wrote this one......sounds like a beautiful wedding......thank you for sharing thoughts with me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Always Near
28th Jun 2016 5:38am
A Ruby Wedding is a 40th wedding anniversary. The couple's wedding itself had taken place in 1976, about which we heard some references (best remembered in UK for that summer drought).
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Re: Re. Always Near
29th Jun 2016 10:39pm
Thank you Solomon for getting back to me and telling the history here......very awesome......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Always Near
26th Jun 2016 11:58pm
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28th Jun 2016 3:46am
Hey Howling......I always appreciate your humbling praise to me......thrilled you liked this so much......you've given me a smile right before bed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Always Near
27th Jun 2016 7:16pm
You always warm my heart, and this is just what I needed to help me through this Monday morning. I was feeling generally disgruntled until I read this. Now I don't feel the urge to search and destroy. Thanks Flower!
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Re: Re. Always Near
28th Jun 2016 3:50am
Wow Crow......you must really have had bad morning....so happy I could help make it better......you've made my night better by your gracious words....glad you've gotten over "the urge to search and destroy".....I just the urge to smile they the night......thank you back for always stopping my way.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2016 7:45pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, the whole write is a stunning piece but that last stanza...mwah...perfection....With love - Sweet S xo :)
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Re: Re. Always Near
17th Jul 2016 3:31am
Sweet S......MWAH right back at ya my friend......thank you.....I'm very honored from your words.....sending purple luv & hugs your way xo :)