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It's that Spot...
Right there...alone,
in our lil spot
You, me, forever...hot
My cockhead, caressin'
your pussy lips...as he
seeps a tear
'Pon your tulips,
those two lips, slowly
part...n' the thick head darts...
plunges
in to search for heaven...
The ride is hard, fast
he throws up...
massive amounts
of molten CUM...
to the welcome of comin'
home where dreams are...
As you thrust him out n' in
your waiting greedy mouth,
to resuscitate him...
to ejaculate further into
your hot room where the tongue
bathes him...
n' encourages one
after the other urges for his fat swollen head to bloom n' bloom...
As we copulate,
with a mad array of cock,
pussy, ass, tits n'mouths
lustfully lost... in a heated knot
Forever, engulfed in ecstasy
in our lil spot...
in our lil spot
You, me, forever...hot
My cockhead, caressin'
your pussy lips...as he
seeps a tear
'Pon your tulips,
those two lips, slowly
part...n' the thick head darts...
plunges
in to search for heaven...
The ride is hard, fast
he throws up...
massive amounts
of molten CUM...
to the welcome of comin'
home where dreams are...
As you thrust him out n' in
your waiting greedy mouth,
to resuscitate him...
to ejaculate further into
your hot room where the tongue
bathes him...
n' encourages one
after the other urges for his fat swollen head to bloom n' bloom...
As we copulate,
with a mad array of cock,
pussy, ass, tits n'mouths
lustfully lost... in a heated knot
Forever, engulfed in ecstasy
in our lil spot...
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Re. It's that Spot...
22nd Jun 2016 8:07pm
Re: Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 5:24am
Aaawww don't run away sweetie, I won't bite! lol... Thank you so much
I truly appreciate your thoughts n support :)
I truly appreciate your thoughts n support :)
Re. It's that Spot...
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2016 8:11pm
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 5:27am
Re. It's that Spot...
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2016 11:14pm
Whew! Helluva visual you set up there! 😉
Timid
Timid
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 5:28am
Just trying to distract myself from the frustration of reality lol... Thank u sweetheart, honored by your support :)
Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 00:01am
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23rd Jun 2016 5:44am
Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 00:19am
Re: Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 5:51am
Well you could always 'dip it' in your cream to add some sugar to it! lol
Mmmmm...yea thank u my sweet Crim! :)
Mmmmm...yea thank u my sweet Crim! :)
Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 00:56am
Re: Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 5:52am
Re. It's that Spot...
23rd Jun 2016 10:14pm
Mmm hmm that hit the spot..Excellent as always Poetik..i like how this has a lil bit of everything mixed with that special something..your own special flavor..sensual ink..i enjoyed
Fav lines:
"Pon your tulips,
those two lips, slowly
part...n' the thick head darts...
plunges
in to search for heaven... "
Fav lines:
"Pon your tulips,
those two lips, slowly
part...n' the thick head darts...
plunges
in to search for heaven... "
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
24th Jun 2016 00:52am
In other words a smorgasbord of yummy? lmao... Thank you my sweet Desirous one! Truly n always grateful for your support :)
Re. It's that Spot...
Anonymous
24th Jun 2016 3:49pm
PM!!! Oh my! *she goes to get some ice* Let me collect my thoughts..................................yeah....it'll be a bit....I'm sure you knew these would be my favs...
"your waiting greedy mouth,
to resuscitate him...
to ejaculate further into
your hot room where the tongue
bathes him...
n' encourages one
after the other urges for his fat swollen head to bloom n' bloom..."
Crimony jickets!!
xoxo Taryn
"your waiting greedy mouth,
to resuscitate him...
to ejaculate further into
your hot room where the tongue
bathes him...
n' encourages one
after the other urges for his fat swollen head to bloom n' bloom..."
Crimony jickets!!
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
24th Jun 2016 9:18pm
"Crimony jickets!?" Lmao that's funny as shit lol... Thank you my sweetheart, flattered n honored always :)
Re. It's that Spot...
25th Jun 2016 2:30am
You've got things stirring with this one PM...thoroughly enjoyed the read...now I have to excuse myself ;-)
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
21st Jul 2016 9:35pm
Thought I replied to u on this??! :( sorry sweetheart, but I'm happy you enjoyed n deeply appreciate u :)
Re. It's that Spot...
26th Jun 2016 4:56pm
Re: Re. It's that Spot...
26th Jun 2016 5:23pm
Aaawww look at you making me smile all big n cheesy lol... Thank you my beauty, truly appreciate you much :)
Re. It's that Spot...
Anonymous
30th Jun 2016 2:20pm
What a lustiful feast you
..feed our minds and twinges
goshdamn it
Mmhh.
and this .then.that which
..brings about a collision
of pearls
[As we copulate,
with a mad array of cock,
pussy, ass, tits n'mouths
lustfully lost... in a heated knot
Forever, engulfed in ecstasy
in our lil spot...]
;) good morning babe
..feed our minds and twinges
goshdamn it
Mmhh.
and this .then.that which
..brings about a collision
of pearls
[As we copulate,
with a mad array of cock,
pussy, ass, tits n'mouths
lustfully lost... in a heated knot
Forever, engulfed in ecstasy
in our lil spot...]
;) good morning babe
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
30th Jun 2016 3:37pm
Lmao...it seems you liked lol
But I'm truly happy you did n of course if I were so lucky it would be a very good morning lol thank u my sweetness :)
But I'm truly happy you did n of course if I were so lucky it would be a very good morning lol thank u my sweetness :)
Re. It's that Spot...
16th Jul 2016 9:16am
Re: Re. It's that Spot...
16th Jul 2016 7:36pm
I guess I should've slowed if down a bit, maybe it would've burned a lil more hunger in you lol... Thanks sweetheart, appreciate you. :)
Re. It's that Spot...
Anonymous
21st Jul 2016 12:39pm
Very delicious.
The imagery is so potent.
Love this sensual ink.
The imagery is so potent.
Love this sensual ink.
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Re: Re. It's that Spot...
21st Jul 2016 9:38pm
You are too wonderful...again, I'm flattered n truly appreciate your feedback on my naughty spill lol
Re. It's that Spot...
9th Aug 2016 3:16pm
Re: Re. It's that Spot...
9th Aug 2016 10:18pm
"I wanna take my clothes off!" lol Yea... Love my music n all things creative n passionate :) thank u, indebted I am :)
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10th Aug 2016 12:19pm
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10th Aug 2016 12:57pm