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a death wish is different from a suicide
i will not hold the handle of the knife
that finally gores me
spilling the mundane secrets of my anatomy
on a poor somebody's floor
the muscle that breaks
the pulsing barrier
between the worlds
it is not mine,
not mine
Published 22nd Jun 2016
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22nd Jun 2016 3:19pm
Anonymous
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22nd Jun 2016 6:05pm
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22nd Jun 2016 6:16pm
muck forums, indeed......
nice t'see something of quality come out it
nice t'see something of quality come out it
22nd Jun 2016 6:24pm
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2016 6:27pm
excellent ink.
always worthy and powerful writes from you
left me pondering a lot.
much love
always worthy and powerful writes from you
left me pondering a lot.
much love
"mundane secrets of my anatomy"
never, there exist no metaphysical pathologist of the nether soul to divine the strenuous secrets of your inner garden i love like the seductive whisper of jump from every height i've dared to peer from high
never, there exist no metaphysical pathologist of the nether soul to divine the strenuous secrets of your inner garden i love like the seductive whisper of jump from every height i've dared to peer from high
23rd Jun 2016 00:12am
you never hear the bullet that's got your name on it:
there's some comfort in that.
heavy metal...
there's some comfort in that.
heavy metal...
23rd Jun 2016 8:10am
The way you weave words to reflect the emotions sparking your inner thoughts is quite amazing, you're a true poet. Your writing style is fantastic. Looks like another for the reading list.
27th Jun 2016 4:11am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
18th May 2019 10:15pm
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