Poetry

excellent ink, Crim
never any dead poetry out of you
I often worry that my writes might fuck with heads too much..based on my inboxed messages over the years.
but I guess if it is honest then it's worthy
you've taken me down roads with you many times and I'm always the richer for going along

much love to you my dear :)

thank you Miki your poetry is awesome lovely lady..

appreciate you for journeying with me :)

love Brenda

Smgdh..And you are after the heart
of my soul..

yep, perfectly bitten  ladyloves

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aw thank you lovely Malady :)

love Crim

in this plastic world

And there is the crux of our society.
It has become a plastic melting pot
trying to absorb anything organic
in its wake. It is so difficult to feel
anything in the midst of all the hardness
at times.

thank you Sage one yes it is indeed a plastic world the real makes us uncomfortable..

love Crim

Powerful ink Precious Crim......all your ink is beyond the imagination.......you always take us on a journey thru each and every write......even if it's to hell and back......luv ya talented poetess who touches many souls.....more than she will ever know......purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower..

grateful for your bright light..

love Crim

Agreed with FlowerGirl
FUCK YEAH!!!
Crim, Baby... you move us all
I love the passion in all the genres you shed your ink
Much, much respect <3 dkruie

thank you most kindly Dkruie for venturing with me..

love Crim

Perfect, Brenda. It takes quite a lot to cause me to
take a step back, close myself inside of self, and
weather the rawness of words which bother some
part of me I don't particularly like. But I have to admit
it does happen . . .

thank you Jerry I know I cause discomfort with some of my writes..

I'm just confronting fractured parts of me that I need to face..

thank you for braving the stormy waters..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, I can only speak for myself when I say the following but, you always have a way of conveying what you intend, just as in this one...kick ass poetry no matter the subject, you always find a way to take me away and join you...

"drink of me I've got your potion
the elixir to touch your mind

visit drug infested allies with me
do the detestable in your dreams
I promise with me it won't sting

i'll take you down nice and slow
bring you to magical vistas
it's all in my imagination"

I love you

xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one for always showing me understanding..

I love you so much..

xoxo Brenda

sometimes nice & slow, sometimes hard & quick.
it's always a wild ride, Crim...

thank you John giggling you're right about sometimes hard and quick :)

love Crim

A strong ink, precious soul, that I've connected with with certain others over time.  

love, Jade

thank you Jade for the keen eye and understanding this..

love Crim

I think it's safe to say, Lady Crim, that you are the temptress of forsaken desire. If you fail to get someone's blood pumping then there is something wrong with them. Keep up the excellent writes, dear, they are always the words that lead us.

thank you my Darkest Lord for the never failing encouragement to reveal all in my writes..

forever in darkness Crim

I've read this 4 times
It is an honor to read you

Xo

aw Poet thank you a better comment from you I couldn't get :)

love Brenda

you could never be bland...
... your're like the ghost pepper
in my poetic diet ^.^
love you staxxxx lady

thank you beautiful Katja you move me greatly with your writes I cherish your thoughts..

love you lady..

xoxo Brenda

Yup, shaodoe's right! Bland ain't you by a looooooooonnngggh shot lady C! N As always I'm addicted to your spills :)

aw thank you Poe as I am yours :)

love Crim

never any dead poetry
never any limpness in my mind
always climbing
discovering
and viewing the newest vistas with you

even the raw ones that fuck with my mind
thanks again

thank you Sir you made me smile with your comment :)

love Crimsin

My dearest Brenda,
No matter the subject matter you always grab the reader's attention with your brilliance and lead them to the intended place. Sometimes to places where others would not tread. I adore you and the write.

Keith

thank you Keith for seeing the beauty in my writes :)

love Brenda

Brenda.. you're pure inspiration.. on a roll, and kicking ass.. i'm not only a friend.. i'm a huge fan.. and unlike most fans, i've had the honor to write with the one i look up too.. i'm just amazed by your poetry.. love you!!



Dave

thank you graciously Dave was my great pleasure to write with you :)

love Brenda

Your poetry is excellent

thank you most graciously..

love Crim

In love with words?

No.

In love with the emotions, ideas and concepts that is verse.
The meaning, feeling and poetic power that make words, seeds?

Thank you for a beautiful poem.

thank you graciously and welcome to du :)

love Crim