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Blessings
Blessings come from a willingness
to Trust, to open and receive Love.
Fear parts to reveal galaxies of us
doubts as shooting stars burning
down the darkness of our throats.
Our breath splaying Joy across
the deserted shoreline of Hope
laughter when its two-years-old.
A supernova of unblocked dust
revealing the tangible as a mere
expansion of Spiritual Truth
suddenly recognized beyond flesh
an unexpected gift for no reason
than because we simply exist.
~
Published 19th Jun 2016
| Edited 20th Dec 2016
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Anonymous
19th Jun 2016 9:46pm
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19th Jun 2016 9:55pm
Beautiful, Ahavati .... hmmmm see, now i just may have to clear space for this one ... :)
19th Jun 2016 11:25pm
That's quite an honor, and enough
that you would simply consider it, Jemac.
Thank you.
that you would simply consider it, Jemac.
Thank you.
19th Jun 2016 10:11pm
20th Jun 2016 00:16am
Wonderful Ahavati. It is great to read and to listen. :) I love the final 6 lines especially.
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20th Jun 2016 3:23am
Always love to hear people's voices! One of these days, I'll have to try it myself, but after a morning, teaching in the classroom, I'm sick of hearing myself talk. LOL LOL!
20th Jun 2016 4:02pm
Anonymous
20th Jun 2016 7:34am
such beautiful truths, Ahavati
we must be open to receive
great, inspiring, soothing ink.
we must be open to receive
great, inspiring, soothing ink.
20th Jun 2016 3:57pm
You sound so young for one so wise... are you sure it's you? I trust that it is...
20th Jun 2016 3:55pm
I like to hire young ladies who need extra cash to do my readings.
Their milkshake brings the boys to the yard. :)
Their milkshake brings the boys to the yard. :)
21st Jun 2016 8:48am
Heck, I'll do your readings for free... and drive all the other boys away. And the girls, and the cats, mice, voles, anything with an ear for music...
21st Jun 2016 11:52am
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2016 3:05pm
I think this was meant for me
..giving life within asphyxiating
pain.
Thank you for the written bread .
..giving life within asphyxiating
pain.
Thank you for the written bread .
20th Jun 2016 3:55pm
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20th Jun 2016 8:57pm
Beautiful, chaotic and structured unrest all at once. This poem takes the reader on a ride, Ahavati, and it's maybe a little bit of a disconcerting ride at that. All this going on, and perhaps, for no reason at all.
20th Jun 2016 9:24pm
22nd Jun 2016 12:30pm
22nd Jun 2016 6:47pm
What a wonderful comment.
To know a poem lit someone else's Universe
is a true blessing. Thank you, brother.
To know a poem lit someone else's Universe
is a true blessing. Thank you, brother.
22nd Jun 2016 5:49pm
I am blowing hand kisses in the winds
to find you..
totally speechless and still I'm absorbing
.
So beautifully felt my Ahavati darling.
-Howlings
to find you..
totally speechless and still I'm absorbing
.
So beautifully felt my Ahavati darling.
-Howlings
22nd Jun 2016 6:47pm
22nd Jun 2016 6:19pm
Superb
(as if y needs me to say so after a pro-fuse scrolling of acolytes.....)
(as if y needs me to say so after a pro-fuse scrolling of acolytes.....)
22nd Jun 2016 6:48pm
6th Aug 2016 8:07am
I absorbed your words... this was exactly what I needed today!
Then... I listened... your voice felt like a warm breeze, thank you!!!
Then... I listened... your voice felt like a warm breeze, thank you!!!
6th Aug 2016 10:47pm
Anonymous
15th Aug 2016 12:48pm
When ever I feel down. I read your poetry. It can take me places I have never been and could only dream of. Thank you always for the journey.
15th Aug 2016 10:48pm
