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Sandman
He comes during terror sleep
And his hands reek of sulfur
He clicks together
His long nails black
With dirty deed
Click click click..click
And ready to prick touch
Starts slow trace from shoulder
To ear...
I swallow silent tears...
I lay
Unable to scream out
Frozen
And dread consumes my manic mind
And flood memories
Of other monsters touch
Those monsters were supposed to love me
Protect me from
Sandman...
Too afraid to sleep and face
The tragedy of truth
And another night the shame..
Insomnia sets in...
Days without sleep or ease
And fear manifests
Through self destruction..
And so still years after touch
He abducts me from myself...
Night after restless night...
Robbing me of
Pieces of and the peace in me...
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 14th Jun 2016
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Re. Sandman
14th Jun 2016 4:56pm
Deeply chilling ... Thank you for sharing.
I have two daughters and can't imagine this happening to them.
Is the picture something you drew? ... Just curios.
I have two daughters and can't imagine this happening to them.
Is the picture something you drew? ... Just curios.
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Re: Re. Sandman
14th Jun 2016 6:27pm
Yes....That's Sandman...I woke one morning and had drawn it in the night. No recollection of it....but I sleepwalk....have cooked...walked my dogs...asleep.
Thanks Lobo darlin....❤
Thanks Lobo darlin....❤
Re. Sandman
14th Jun 2016 6:33pm
Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 3:39am
Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 3:39am
Re. Sandman
15th Jun 2016 7:22pm
"He abducts me from myself...
Night after restless night...
Robbing me of
Pieces of and the peace in me."
Now that was awesome. This is really great work, Jen. I felt haunted while reading it. I know the subject is detestable, but your ability to to tell it is core shuddering.
Night after restless night...
Robbing me of
Pieces of and the peace in me."
Now that was awesome. This is really great work, Jen. I felt haunted while reading it. I know the subject is detestable, but your ability to to tell it is core shuddering.
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Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 3:44am
Moe i always learn from your comment...
Thanks so much! Check poetry universe on FB...you might like it..and a couple others..i think its op.im under Jen McCurry...if you need an invite..ask me.
Fr if you please...understand if not...know your e hitched..
Love
J
Thanks so much! Check poetry universe on FB...you might like it..and a couple others..i think its op.im under Jen McCurry...if you need an invite..ask me.
Fr if you please...understand if not...know your e hitched..
Love
J
Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 3:44am
Moe i always learn from your comment...
Thanks so much! Check poetry universe on FB...you might like it..and a couple others..i think its op.im under Jen McCurry...if you need an invite..ask me.
Fr if you please...understand if not...know your e hitched..
Love
J
Thanks so much! Check poetry universe on FB...you might like it..and a couple others..i think its op.im under Jen McCurry...if you need an invite..ask me.
Fr if you please...understand if not...know your e hitched..
Love
J
Re. Sandman
15th Jun 2016 8:31pm
This is absolutely heart breaking Jen. To bare your soul like this takes a certain kind of bravery and I applaud you for getting it out. May it help you to deal with this in some way. One can only hope.
Love you
John
Love you
John
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Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 3:46am
Thanks sweetness...you fb me too...my mail is down..
Love to chat honey
Love
J
Love to chat honey
Love
J
Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 3:46am
Thanks sweetness...you fb me too...my mail is down..
Love to chat honey
Love
J
Love to chat honey
Love
J
Re. Sandman
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jun 2016 2:51am
16th Jun 2016 00:59am
Bravo!!! I like the way this poem is written, the way you attempt to confront those recurring nightmares, as if you're saying, 'Ok, enough now'. Also, I love the poem's artwork, bringing sandman to life in this way is so so creepy, as if your words aren't nightmarish already. I get the chills just looking at him! This must have been a very difficult piece to write but it is truly outstanding because it starkly states that sandman is one of the last people we would ever wish to meet & should be avoided at all costs. Well done on this write & may it truly be the start of that journey on the road to peace for you. x
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Re: Re. Sandman
What a perfect comment .
....when i woke and saw what i had drawn...i.had a violent physical reaction.
Knew exactly who it was...cried for days
..but im doing so well...thank you.
Ding dong the Sandmans dead...and i shed no tears. I would hear grandmother...Sandmans tucking you in soon.....laid stone still like i was dead.
I cant stand the word...hurts to use..
But it was good for me...might not have wrote it if not for your write ...thank you sweetly...and think im ready for the colab if you are ever...
Emails down...fb for messenger Jen McCurry
Love and thanks
Jenny🌷
....when i woke and saw what i had drawn...i.had a violent physical reaction.
Knew exactly who it was...cried for days
..but im doing so well...thank you.
Ding dong the Sandmans dead...and i shed no tears. I would hear grandmother...Sandmans tucking you in soon.....laid stone still like i was dead.
I cant stand the word...hurts to use..
But it was good for me...might not have wrote it if not for your write ...thank you sweetly...and think im ready for the colab if you are ever...
Emails down...fb for messenger Jen McCurry
Love and thanks
Jenny🌷
Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 4:00am
What a perfect comment .
....when i woke and saw what i had drawn...i.had a violent physical reaction.
Knew exactly who it was...cried for days
..but im doing so well...thank you.
Ding dong the Sandmans dead...and i shed no tears. I would hear grandmother...Sandmans tucking you in soon.....laid stone still like i was dead.
I cant stand the word...hurts to use..
But it was good for me...might not have wrote it if not for your write ...thank you sweetly...and think im ready if you are ever...
Emails down...fb for messenger Jen McCurry
Love and thanks
Jenny🌷
....when i woke and saw what i had drawn...i.had a violent physical reaction.
Knew exactly who it was...cried for days
..but im doing so well...thank you.
Ding dong the Sandmans dead...and i shed no tears. I would hear grandmother...Sandmans tucking you in soon.....laid stone still like i was dead.
I cant stand the word...hurts to use..
But it was good for me...might not have wrote it if not for your write ...thank you sweetly...and think im ready if you are ever...
Emails down...fb for messenger Jen McCurry
Love and thanks
Jenny🌷
Re: Re. Sandman
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jun 2016 1:53pm
16th Jun 2016 6:00am
Yes, it takes a lot of courage to say the things that make us weak. It'd be nice to think you won't dwell on it as much in the future as you have. It's all in the past even though the memories aren't. I think you've punished yourself enough over this. I realise it needed to come out but now that it has, there is no more use in beating yourself, after all you're the one who need feel no shame & I think you're beginning to see that now. :-)
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Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 2:05pm
Re. Sandman
Anonymous
16th Jun 2016 8:51am
This is a really great poem!
I have a lot of sleep issues too, parasomnias, phase shifting, sleep paralysis, rythmic movement, basically everything on the list except narcolepsy thank goodness! So I can totally relate.
I like the drawing too. I'm a big art fan even though I can't really draw or paint much myself. You should check out the artist Joseph Bounds. He's my absolute favorite and super strange... right on that borderline of beauty and insanity. Here's a link to his site: http://www.josephbounds.com/
I have a lot of sleep issues too, parasomnias, phase shifting, sleep paralysis, rythmic movement, basically everything on the list except narcolepsy thank goodness! So I can totally relate.
I like the drawing too. I'm a big art fan even though I can't really draw or paint much myself. You should check out the artist Joseph Bounds. He's my absolute favorite and super strange... right on that borderline of beauty and insanity. Here's a link to his site: http://www.josephbounds.com/
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Re: Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 2:10pm
Oh...yes.became..familoar with his work recently...
Isnt sleep paralysis crazy...there are theories that is where the phenomena of incubus and succubus come from....i see why..i thought a ghost had me down a couple times...
Thanks! Look forward to seeing more pf you
Love
Jen
Isnt sleep paralysis crazy...there are theories that is where the phenomena of incubus and succubus come from....i see why..i thought a ghost had me down a couple times...
Thanks! Look forward to seeing more pf you
Love
Jen
Re. Sandman
16th Jun 2016 8:50pm
Frightening and eloquent work Jen. I thought of Metallica's "Sandman" while I was reading this and realized how much further you go with a garden of night terrors.
"And fear manifests
Through self destruction..
And so still years after touch
He abducts me from myself...
Night after restless night..."
Don't let him push you into self-destruction Jen. He's made of sand after all. Still powerful, chilling work, and I'll never look under my bed again.
"And fear manifests
Through self destruction..
And so still years after touch
He abducts me from myself...
Night after restless night..."
Don't let him push you into self-destruction Jen. He's made of sand after all. Still powerful, chilling work, and I'll never look under my bed again.
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Re: Re. Sandman
17th Jun 2016 11:50am
He is nothing now...my Grandma would tell me he'd tuck me in soon...
Went through hell in that bed...
T Crow....... Damnitt..miss you..need account info...please call.
Love you so much
Jen
Went through hell in that bed...
T Crow....... Damnitt..miss you..need account info...please call.
Love you so much
Jen
Re. Sandman
2nd Mar 2017 11:38am
Haunting piece. Eloquently penned. i'll be looking out for more from you.
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