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"Foolish Love"

Since we're good friends
This hidden, love never failed
But all you know is your lonely past
And the pain that she brings in your heart

Every time when we're together
This crazy feeling, gets even stronger
The pain in my heart always travel
In my body and mind, that cause me a fever

I love you, you love her,
You love her, but she love's another
I give my best to make you happy
Even though it breaks my heart, really

I try to be bridge, between you and her
For I can make your life more complete
But, what she's done was very in human
That bring's your life a messy one

I love you, that's why I help you to survive
And brings back the shine in your life
To carry-on the pain in your heart
To heal the pain of your broken heart

Sometimes, I don't understand myself
Sometimes, I want to think I'm crazy
I was fool enough to fall in love this way
But I can't help myself, treating you that way

You're too blind for you cannot see me
You're too deaf for you cannot hear me
My foolish heart, loves someone like you
That never deserve to win, that's true

It could be days, months, or even a year
That this heart of mine, be a fool to live
Living in love for no one knows
If you'll give a chance, for my love that shows

But If you'll still the same, being blind to see
Maybe having you is a crazy thing to weary
Which I will treasure all my life
And only memory to brings back in life

I guess, I really have to forget you
And give myself a chance to recover
For I must admit, that I really don't deserve you
But I can be a better person just for you

So this is goodbye for both of us
Maybe we won't belong in each other's heart
I can forget you, why not
But only time will tell, when be forgot

You don't have to worry for I can be strong
Cause I'm still hopeful, that days are still long
For me to wait, that someday your love will grow
And for you to realize, that I'm the one you know

I hope that someday, it'll come true
Cause I'll reserve my love, just for you
Even though we've said goodbye, its alright
Coz goodbye is not forever to be abide

I may have said that I can forget you
But you know Baby, it is untrue
Saying those words breaks my heart
Bringing pain and soon a would to start

You may be thinking everything went wrong
That brings our friendship a sinking boat
But we can make it float if we start again
Start a relationship with feelings that is open

They may call us fools
But we knows who fools really are
We don't care for what they say
Coz we're happy of this foolish love we made

My foolish love for you
Your foolish love with her
Our foolish love for one another
That we end up together

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Written by Dhenz

(Laters Baby)

Published 11th Jun 2016

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Re. "Foolish Love"

JAZZMANOR

13th Jun 2016 3:10pm

Triangles always have edges. Noticing your preference for comments I shall withhold my one rather tiny adjustment I might make. That old adage rings true, "logic and what the heart wants aren't always in synch"

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Dhenz (Laters Baby)

14th Jun 2016 1:41pm

thanks for that comment....

atleast they end up together :)

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Re. "Foolish Love"

Anonymous

- Edited 26th Jun 2016 2:27am

25th Jun 2016 2:45pm

This poem's possibly too long Dhenz. I can see 3 poems in 1 here. I know you've got a lot to say right now & do keep writing down all your thoughts. What you're saying is great. You just need an editor who can say, why don't we try it this way? Good stuff though.