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Apricus
the scent lingers
between fingers
inquisitive
soft and seductive
brushing against lips
with every bite
moulding yearnings
waxed teardrops
seeped into skin
swaying tendons
tremble to the light
seeking warmth
unfurling
your breath, my haven
arched constellations
in the night
smeared with desire
apricot flesh, blushed
streaked
with golden glow
silk-spun reflection
in mirrored eyes
as I burrow deeper
in revolution of wrinkles
rising with the tides
Image: Random google find by AD.
Published 11th Jun 2016
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11th Jun 2016 3:26am
11th Jun 2016 3:34am
Thanks SS, i'm glad you like it.
I don't write erotica unless I'm truly inspired and this one certainly came with a beautiful inspiration.
I don't write erotica unless I'm truly inspired and this one certainly came with a beautiful inspiration.
Anonymous
11th Jun 2016 4:19am
Whohoo!!!! Hey Vee.....perfect write to read right before going to bed......mmmmmm....sweet dreams for sure....luv this sexy piece......perfect night cap LOL!! purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Jun 2016 5:05pm
Beautiful Flower, lots of purple love to you too, thank you for your sweet comment.
11th Jun 2016 4:51am
Rina.. my sister.. this is truly brilliant, and inspirational.. lovely erotic ink..
Dave
Dave
12th Jun 2016 5:09pm
11th Jun 2016 5:30am
16th Jun 2016 10:41pm
11th Jun 2016 6:05am
Such a beautiful piece here, you can feel the warmth and passion, yet never breaks its subtly. Great write Vee.
16th Jun 2016 10:42pm
11th Jun 2016 10:30am
This transcends all . . . . ..indulgent as eroticism must be, the reader needs no instruction this is for the mature; this inspires rather than excites, uniting mind and soul ....I have been there. Wonderful Vee Kexby
16th Jun 2016 10:44pm
I've been fortunate enough to read your poetry Mr. Kexby and grateful that I've learned so much from you and your poetry, thank you.
11th Jun 2016 6:56pm
16th Jun 2016 11:11pm
Vee, I rode this wave with ecstasy smiles. You've put into delicious words one of the most pleasurable aspects of life. This passage is beautiful:
"smeared with desire
apricot flesh, blushed
streaked
with golden glow "
And "scent" is just one of my favorite words.
"smeared with desire
apricot flesh, blushed
streaked
with golden glow "
And "scent" is just one of my favorite words.
16th Jun 2016 11:13pm
At this time of the year everything is bronzed, luscious, juicy lol dripping in...well you know... ;)
naturally this poem was easy to conceive when nature just bursts open like a ripe fruit, thanks GW for enjoying it :)
naturally this poem was easy to conceive when nature just bursts open like a ripe fruit, thanks GW for enjoying it :)
12th Jun 2016 2:29am
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18th Jun 2016 3:36pm
'waxes and wanes' you described it so well Ahavati.
The whole universe is created with that pull n' tug, yin yang, soft n' hard, light n' dark..and i can go on and on...thank you for appreciating this write, its definitely one of (handful) of favorites also.
The whole universe is created with that pull n' tug, yin yang, soft n' hard, light n' dark..and i can go on and on...thank you for appreciating this write, its definitely one of (handful) of favorites also.
16th Jun 2016 2:28pm
Usually I don't read much erotica-- but this is the best of it. Nuanced, carefully crafted poetry that tugs at the heartstrings. There was wonderful fluidity here, and strong images-- "apricot flesh" was the perfect choice. Thank you for sharing. Stunning poem.
25th Feb 2017 3:29am
Thank you very much Muses for the wonderful compliment and please accept my apology for this late response, I appreciate your time in visiting my page.
16th Feb 2017 8:48pm
To me it is the circle-Why it could/should be ...ebb and flow is life -breathing
Sensual piece that reads with perfect warmth!!!
Sensual piece that reads with perfect warmth!!!
25th Feb 2017 3:32am
what can i say, it was a hot sultry sizzling upper 90's kind of month of June where everything was turning a shade deeper than blush, from skin to thoughts lol
