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poem for my wife

         
         
         
         
       
       
       

       
         
and watching her          
undress at night          
and wonder how I'd      
got things right...          
         
         
         
         
         
         
         
         
         
     
     
     
         
         
 
dartford
Written by dartford (Paul S...)
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Re. poem for my wife
11th Jun 2016 3:40am
that is why she puts up with you...I hope she reads this
SatansSperm
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(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 10:48pm
she's very tolerant..:)
thank you...
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
11th Jun 2016 4:33am
that's a major score...
JohnFeddeler
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Re: Re. poem for my wife
(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 10:49pm
oh, but I'm just minor league...
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
11th Jun 2016 8:41am
☺☺
WillowsWhimsies
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Re: Re. poem for my wife
(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 10:50pm
:) !
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
11th Jun 2016 9:23am
He who can watch his wife get undressed has a marriage that's blessed. I have to cover my eyes or I get suicidal...
AnnaKissedMe
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Re: Re. poem for my wife
(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 10:52pm
you shouldn't be watching my wife !
not that I blame you...     :)
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
- Edited 11th Jun 2016 3:57pm
11th Jun 2016 3:55pm
Your beauty is showing, Paul.  :) Glistening verse.
Pishashee
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Re: Re. poem for my wife
(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 10:55pm
but it's her beauty that's showing,
as her dress slips to the floor..:)

thanks, Pish...
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
Anonymous
11th Jun 2016 5:12pm
A humble man seems to be extinct nowadays but this proves that there are good guys out there like you Paul.  
Very nice sentimental poem.
Anonymous
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Re: Re. poem for my wife
(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 11:01pm
oh, I'm not good.
I've told her for years
that she makes lousy
coffee...
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
(Tams)
- Edited 11th Jun 2016 8:49pm
11th Jun 2016 8:48pm
This is the side of you I love.
Read Li-Young Lee's  
'Early in the Morning'
when you have time.
Ahavati
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Re: Re. poem for my wife
(Paul S...)
11th Jun 2016 11:05pm
well then, I shall...  

just as soon as I've finished
seven shades of...

(joke!!!)
dartford
Re. poem for my wife
(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
12th Jun 2016 2:13pm
sweet, you ol'sweetie
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
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