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Just the tip...
I can feel synapse and it's effervescence firing in my head as you start to break my will with the tip of you
Barely entering
the opening of me.
You leave me begging...wanting... cloudy.
You tease me.
Up and down...
Slowly.
I am dripping onto the sheets below us.
The chaos must be obvious in me,
This unrelenting storm.
My heart beat echoes in my ears.
My skin screaming in agony,
Delirium has taken over.
Words fail me.
Prayer fails me.
This feels like an eternity and I can not take anymore.
With my will completely broken,
You slide inside me,
And calm my suffering...
Barely entering
the opening of me.
You leave me begging...wanting... cloudy.
You tease me.
Up and down...
Slowly.
I am dripping onto the sheets below us.
The chaos must be obvious in me,
This unrelenting storm.
My heart beat echoes in my ears.
My skin screaming in agony,
Delirium has taken over.
Words fail me.
Prayer fails me.
This feels like an eternity and I can not take anymore.
With my will completely broken,
You slide inside me,
And calm my suffering...
Published 10th Jun 2016
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10th Jun 2016 5:18am
I knew all it'd take was the tip of me to make ur spill it's hunger lol ...
Very hott spill!!!
Very hott spill!!!
10th Jun 2016 7:40am
10th Jun 2016 6:03am
A very good ink spill!
If you can get the reader at one with the imaginations of the piece then you've
achieved
I was almost wimpering for pleasurable calmness along with her.
If you can get the reader at one with the imaginations of the piece then you've
achieved
I was almost wimpering for pleasurable calmness along with her.
10th Jun 2016 7:45am
Don't need you suffering as well, lovely Rose!!!!
Thank you very much, hun!
Xoxo
Thank you very much, hun!
Xoxo
10th Jun 2016 7:14am
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19th Oct 2016 11:01pm
The unrelenting storm. I was just waiting for her eyes to roll back.
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27th Oct 2016 10:25pm
....tis the only way for a Satyr to subdue a succubus. Slowly, intently, with deliberation. This one was absolutely divine 👹
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Very intense, exciting imagery. Nymphomaniacal, satyriatic. Amongst the best erotica I have read.
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7th Jun 2017 4:53pm
A very unique syntax and structure that was beyond the nominal, drew indentity with it. Thanks for shairng your gift. Oral
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6th Jul 2017 3:46pm
The image a future ecstasy for one amazing orgasm , slowly and very intense deep penetration, What a perfect scene.
5th Aug 2017 6:59am
I was anticipating a negative or unproductive consequence here but it seems this write leads to a more redemptive value.,
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7th Dec 2019 6:49am
Well conceived, well constructed...well expressed. The reader is easily absorbed. Like this poem!
13th Feb 2020 5:26am
yes just the tip as you lie there you become relaxed and ready to be probed to the depths of your abyss you tingle from head to toe
well done
well done
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