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Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 4:42am
Very interesting piece.
"Humanity is hung by the noose
to a mockingbird's song"
What a line, what a line. Great write Vee.
"Humanity is hung by the noose
to a mockingbird's song"
What a line, what a line. Great write Vee.
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 5:48am
Thank you Anon for finding it thought provoking.
I'm all for recycling but certain aspects of human trait which becomes redundant in a toxic waste becomes a nuisance. Hence, the inspiration :)
I'm all for recycling but certain aspects of human trait which becomes redundant in a toxic waste becomes a nuisance. Hence, the inspiration :)
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
9th Jun 2016 2:47am
We can only try Mourganna, it pains me to see injustice and I will always feel empathy to the ones who are attacked with force.
Thank you for the read and comment, your feedback is always appreciated my wonderful friend.
Thank you for the read and comment, your feedback is always appreciated my wonderful friend.
Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 7:13am
I look for the message not in the spaces,
but in the words, in the verse;
between the lines, if it goes deep enough.
art is worth time & thought...
but in the words, in the verse;
between the lines, if it goes deep enough.
art is worth time & thought...
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
9th Jun 2016 2:54am
John, even if you have 10 accounts on this site, it wouldn't matter because some of us are here only for the Art and every single one of your art is a Masterpiece.
Thank you for reading between the lines :))
Thank you for reading between the lines :))
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:03am
Thank you Jeje, you are one of the sweetest and kindest people here on du and i'm so glad to know you..hugzz
Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 11:33am
This forced some uncomfortable self reflection. Thanks a lot!(didn't need THAT at 6am! Very thought provoking but also a nice bit of writing. I love all the contrasting images and the last four lines are killer.
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:05am
Thanks Ed, as I'm sure you know by now how much I value your opinion. This was unplanned write, it was based on current events which were so unsettling and revolting that I just couldn't look the other way.
Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 11:46am
White space and white noise
Are like the ocean calling to a poet's pen.
Lovely reflective ink, Vee.
Are like the ocean calling to a poet's pen.
Lovely reflective ink, Vee.
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:08am
Ahavati...If the opportunity ever comes up for a mod's position on this site, you have my complete and full support..we need someone like you DESPERATELY!
Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 1:01pm
I was 'hung' on every word. Which you spilled with such eloquence my dear!
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:10am
Thank you my darling, you have always understood me so well and in return I've always appreciated your honesty and support, much love PIKM xo
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2016 3:34pm
I love first that this makes one think and take stock of themselves, but also I very much love that you made it beautiful...softening the blow to our souls, as it were. Very nice. :)
Willow
Willow

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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:15am
Hi Willows, I'm not one to mince words when needs to be done but in this case I kept it short since plenty of people on this site which were well aware of what happened did better job relaying their emotions but we all had the same thought and same feeling. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I appreciate your visit.
Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 6:15pm
I enjoyed reading this but realise I do not understand its background of a mockingbirds song
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:17am
Re. Mockingbird
8th Jun 2016 9:40pm
Rina.. this is truly beautiful.. because it's filled with the trials, and truths we face daily.. very heartfelt write, brilliantly done.. so nice to read you again, my friend.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:23am
Re. Mockingbird
9th Jun 2016 6:35am
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10th Jun 2016 6:24am
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2016 4:58am
Yep Vee.....it is our choice.....and some just know no other way but to abuse it....I really like this ink.....glad you brought your talent back to share with us again....purple luv & hugs xo :)

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Re: Re. Mockingbird
10th Jun 2016 6:32am
Re. Mockingbird
11th Jun 2016 3:47pm
Vee, this is awesome.! It flows like silk and the poignancy is laser like even to the penetration of the unteachable, unreachable. Brava!
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
11th Jun 2016 4:33pm
GW, we've been friends for a long a time and it's because of you and the other wonderful friends right on this list of commentators make this site worthwhile.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Re. Mockingbird
2nd Jul 2016 4:31am
I really like this poem. It is really like a piece of art. Thank you so much for sharing. I throughly enjoyed reading this poem.
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Re: Re. Mockingbird
2nd Jul 2016 7:57am
Eswaller, thank you for your beautiful praise, and glad you stopped by i'll be taking a stroll to your place very soon to read your work, thanks again :)
Re. Mockingbird
19th Jul 2016 2:19pm
That's it, I'm taking you home
with me to my palace.
Your pieces are more delicious
than recalled.
Wow, yes.
-Howlings
with me to my palace.
Your pieces are more delicious
than recalled.
Wow, yes.
-Howlings
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