Succubus

her calyx grips me in trance  ... I love this line.

There's a psycho sexual tension to this that's engaging yet speaks to the dangers within this relationship ...

Reminds me of a piece I wrote ... When the Old Hag Rides ... she came all to often in my early life, scaring me beyond words ...

Cool ink.

Thanks so much LobodeSanPedro. Love your take on my poem. Your reflections are very much appreciated. :)

John  

Oh I love to read about your sticky nights love...and then like this....gorgeous !
All my deep devotion and love
Jen

Oh I love to read about your sticky nights love...and then like this....gorgeous !
All my deep devotion and love
Jen

My sweetie pie I love to feed you with my naughty verse. You make writing more pleasurable than I've ever known. ;-)

Love and joy from me to you,
John

I liked the loss of consciousness implied in the last line. This is what sex is all about.

Have you read my Arrival of the 69 Angel? These angels exist and are amongst us, as you know.

candycrier, I thank you from my heart. I haven't read that particular book/poem. But indeed the angels do exist and are among us. Much gratitude.

John
 

The title made me smile, because I have a Succubus poem myself...

Love this one!

You've made me smile too Duende! Love that you enjoyed m Succubus poem. :)

John