ambient dirge

the stars at last will sleep
and when the moon departs
the rain will come again…
 you manage to scribe so eloquently as this last verse depicts..beautiful work indeed! curtsy bow to you..

so exquisitely beautiful John..

love Crim

This is so beautiful JohnFeddeler ...

Really like this John,the last verse works
really well,
Excellent ink

sometimes just not being alone is enough - a tight write tightly held

Just rope and gag me damn it!
.. .


Love ya Sir, darling, babe

I'll be back to purchase this soon

This is so damn good, John, from the first line to the last one, it is perfection . . .

Dear John,

Endless cycles of lives seemingly unchanged by the fates.
Until one day...

This is a beautifully written poem. I really like the title too. It gives an interesting feel to the poem itself. Thank you so much for sharing this.

A softer approach than your usual passion display

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Thanks John, I needed that

I loved this John especially the final stanza. Great work.

Fine and reflective work on passions, dreams and the sex drive.

the passions that we dream
in common ways, unfold
we barter love for sex

Interesting how sex eclipses the more tender inclinations.  Human nature, often geared to immediate gratification. opts for those "common ways."  The high road can wait.  

Sir John, as always outstanding ink but these lines (along with the last stanza) got me good...

"a man is born to hunt
and woman feels the same
while fate but spins her web"

With love always - Taryn xoxo

This one is sweet . Like the fresh baked aroma of chocolate cookies...... I want to eat them.

Soft an sweet.Really enjoyed this one.