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Goodnight, Moon
I.
A mockingbird nested
In the childbirth of my youth.
I don’t remember when
Just that its hatchlings
Demanded to be fed
Fear to survive.
I was scared so complied.
As moon cycles
They return each year
Constructing more nests,
And more hatchlings
Demanding to be fed.
Each spring multiplied
Their swollen eyes
And soft cartilage.
II.
Last night I watched a waning crescent
its eyelid heavy with sleep
Stumble across the bedroom of
its celestial sphere.
Its gimlet eye also
Spied me.
III.
The nests emptied.
Instead of pruning
Their shelled crypt for growth
I unearthed it,
Burnt the archives
Exhumed the edicts
Left its womb
Unsown.
IV.
Confessionals are boxes
Of darkness splintered
With just enough light
that repentant sin
can escape – and return
over, and over again.
V.
The biggest effect of fire
On wildlife is a forced change of habitat.
Relocation is essential to survival.
Except in wetlands,
Which aren’t likely to burn.
But, I live inland
So there's that.
VI.
I don’t plan to replant
Anytime soon.
Maybe a year, or two.
Allow the flocks time
To relocate, erase
The flight pattern
Of their memory and
Generations of habit,
Allow emptiness to expand –
The peaceful space to take root
leave the nest, return tenfold.
VII.
Goodnight, moon.
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Re. Goodnight, Moon
4th Jun 2016 1:47pm
I think I've always fed
the traps that catch me,
telling myself that it's
bait, when of course...
the traps that catch me,
telling myself that it's
bait, when of course...
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4th Jun 2016 1:50pm
Contentment is my surname right now. It feels good to discover your true family after a lifetime of searching.
Re: Re. Goodnight, Moon
4th Jun 2016 1:59pm
that's great, Ahavati.
I'm glad. mind you,
if you'd like an extra couple
of cousins, I've some
I've been trying to offload
for years... :)
I'm glad. mind you,
if you'd like an extra couple
of cousins, I've some
I've been trying to offload
for years... :)
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4th Jun 2016 2:00pm
Re. Goodnight, Moon
4th Jun 2016 2:10pm
'Allow emptiness to expand' emptiness like silence a perfect start-point good writing deep thought.
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Re. Goodnight, Moon
4th Jun 2016 2:46pm
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6th Jun 2016 6:14pm
Re. Goodnight, Moon
4th Jun 2016 6:28pm
Virtuoso writing my sister - broad and bold - it has to be to capture and free these birds mocking - I love it's seeming meander - and its conversational style - which belies the shortest route. Very very good
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6th Jun 2016 6:14pm
Re. Goodnight, Moon
4th Jun 2016 6:53pm
I think you're one of a handful of fine writers I could actually read all day without getting bored.
Pen respect to this ink, beautifully brilliant....
Pen respect to this ink, beautifully brilliant....
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6th Jun 2016 6:15pm
Re. Goodnight, Moon
Lovely Ahavati. Your works are amazing. Cycles of nature. cycles of the celestial, cycles of self. I don't know that I have seen the word "gimlet" before so that is a pleasant surprise. lol I've looked at this a few times in the past hour or so, between doing other things and there is always so much meaning, I never quite read it the same way twice. I continually bow to you.
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Re. Goodnight, Moon
5th Jun 2016 6:35am
your gardens are vast & luxuriant;
seeds take flight, & the land replenishes itself...
seeds take flight, & the land replenishes itself...
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Re. Goodnight, Moon
5th Jun 2016 6:47pm
Beautiful poem love!
your poetry always makes me feel..
I love you and your mind sis <3
((((((Ahavati )))))
love Zazzles xoxoxoxox
your poetry always makes me feel..
I love you and your mind sis <3
((((((Ahavati )))))
love Zazzles xoxoxoxox
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6th Jun 2016 6:11pm
Re: Re. Goodnight, Moon
6th Jun 2016 8:03pm
Re. Goodnight, Moon
A mockingbird nested
In the childbirth of my youth.
Ahavati, the opening couplet alone had me wishing for the author to be me.
When I say that about a fellow poet's ink, it's the highest compliment/ praise I can offer.
In the childbirth of my youth.
Ahavati, the opening couplet alone had me wishing for the author to be me.
When I say that about a fellow poet's ink, it's the highest compliment/ praise I can offer.
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Re: Re. Goodnight, Moon
6th Jun 2016 6:10pm
Re. Goodnight, Moon
Oh yes, I took this home with me,
darling.
but I picture you having this
in hand carved wooden frames,
yet the words are finely etched
into a wooden scroll,
the beauty, the chaos, and tranquility
you possess. Love this-
- Howlings
darling.
but I picture you having this
in hand carved wooden frames,
yet the words are finely etched
into a wooden scroll,
the beauty, the chaos, and tranquility
you possess. Love this-
- Howlings
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7th Jun 2016 7:05pm