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Pretty Girl
pretty girl
eyes so bright
your smile brings joy
day and night
pretty girl
with an amazing voice
becoming your friend
was a wonderful choice
pretty girl
who helps me out
you are beautiful
thats no doubt
pretty girl
who makes my day
youre just so pretty
what more can i say
eyes so bright
your smile brings joy
day and night
pretty girl
with an amazing voice
becoming your friend
was a wonderful choice
pretty girl
who helps me out
you are beautiful
thats no doubt
pretty girl
who makes my day
youre just so pretty
what more can i say
Published 15th Jul 2011
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15th Jul 2011 6:35am
To the girl I wrote this for, I'm sorry if its kinda corny. I not to good at writing happy poems. I hope you like it.
15th Jul 2011 11:19am
15th Jul 2011 11:22am
So does that mean you like it? I know it kinda sucks, I just couldn't help but write it.
15th Jul 2011 11:35am
Yeah i like it :D
Although in the 3rd line you said 'youre' when it should say 'your' :p
Although in the 3rd line you said 'youre' when it should say 'your' :p
15th Jul 2011 11:39am
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