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Journeys In Being Taken
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A misconception;
this pleasuring degenerative loss
of bodily control.
We the passengers
instigators
spirits of travel
transgressors of flight.
Were they to think, be it
always them that gives
flush of scrunching toe
Because me and you know, really it's
a misconception
A misconception;
this pleasuring degenerative loss
of bodily control.
We the passengers
instigators
spirits of travel
transgressors of flight.
Were they to think, be it
always them that gives
flush of scrunching toe
Because me and you know, really it's
a misconception
Published 28th May 2016
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28th May 2016 8:49am
Definitely attracts the eye---several words here that I am typically unlikely to link to the topic. The phrasing reminds me of something Bono might put into a U2 song.
28th May 2016 9:13am
Thankyou Jazz xD
Often to be listening to music as I write
But not this week 😁
Silence is a priceless pen when writing a poem
Often to be listening to music as I write
But not this week 😁
Silence is a priceless pen when writing a poem
28th May 2016 9:40am
Oh I don't write with music on, unless it is classical like stuff with no words.
28th May 2016 10:10am
28th May 2016 9:16pm
My problem is being a recreational musician I tend to want to pick up my guitar and see if I can play. Aside from something like Bach's "Little Fugue", such a thought doesn't pop up with the classics.
28th May 2016 10:29pm
28th May 2016 11:45am
it's a private journey,
known only to those particular voyagers.
a toast to transgression...
known only to those particular voyagers.
a toast to transgression...
28th May 2016 11:54am
