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Viewed As Thoughts

 hurdles to jump
great turning point
switching from thoughts
and walking away

you did that
Not I

hugging the dreams
piling the cents
eyes wild at midnight
counting and counting

I did that
not you

taking a gamble
and waking one day
talking to myself
empty screens no reply

and the castle in the air
tumbled down.

Grace
Written by Grace (Idryad)
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