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Murder Loves Death
some affection you showed.
too tired to row your own boat.
too proud to take an insult.
too shy to leave a mark.
so hot and wild and dark.
devil woman I could have loved you.
I could have killed you.
tears from heaven fall on my hair.
I dare not look up in despair.
if you can kill then so can I.
watch me burn this memory alive.
don't play with words that don't suit you.
smarter than most, beautiful are you.
wicked, unclean, demonness serene.
driving me mad with her tantrums.
toying with me.
teasing.
deceiving.
you yell and cry and leave me to die.
you bitch, you whore I love you no more.
laughing and dreaming before the night.
everything after was just a lie.
so much to say while you've gone astray.
my angel, my vixen, frozen you stay.
must I persuade you another way?
too tired to row your own boat.
too proud to take an insult.
too shy to leave a mark.
so hot and wild and dark.
devil woman I could have loved you.
I could have killed you.
tears from heaven fall on my hair.
I dare not look up in despair.
if you can kill then so can I.
watch me burn this memory alive.
don't play with words that don't suit you.
smarter than most, beautiful are you.
wicked, unclean, demonness serene.
driving me mad with her tantrums.
toying with me.
teasing.
deceiving.
you yell and cry and leave me to die.
you bitch, you whore I love you no more.
laughing and dreaming before the night.
everything after was just a lie.
so much to say while you've gone astray.
my angel, my vixen, frozen you stay.
must I persuade you another way?
Published 13th Jul 2011
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14th Aug 2011 11:29pm
This one will require me to re-read. I want to properly give it my attention. I think this one might make my reading list. yes, that it will.
I have many questions...later
I have many questions...later
15th Aug 2011 00:17am
wow... never thought murder loves death would be so interesting :)
questions in the inbox please :P
questions in the inbox please :P
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2018 6:42am
The deeper the read.
The deeper my need.
The power you thrust into your readers carceral minds.
You are a fascinating feast to read. Leaving me dismayed and relieved that this is beyond the thoughts of a muttering murderer .
Leaving myself within this conundrum.
Do I devalue life, because your lust for blood with intent is, pulsating my blood beyond a enticing and provocative pace.
I am scathed and mindful of the Demonness Serene.
Am I to be considered dangerous?
You this aviator author. Have spread, my head, away from
Writing. Are you a keeper of your creed of fate?
How many lines must be uttered or grieved. Fading within the shaden creek.
I thought a moment I could easily toss my thoughts away after I
read a darkened piece. I took my time. I thoughly read every twisted, greedy, and and deplorable letter.
I am awestruck.
I have never been so, thoroughly shaken.
From my haunted thoughts,of dreaming demons.
You have faden to become an undiscovered gem I shall treasure.
You are by far the, Pulitzer of an author
My lover is death. Are you murder?
With these lines I discovered I was changed .
♡don't play with words that don't suit you.
smarter than most, beautiful are you.
wicked, unclean, demonness serene.♡
With respect,
Beth
The deeper my need.
The power you thrust into your readers carceral minds.
You are a fascinating feast to read. Leaving me dismayed and relieved that this is beyond the thoughts of a muttering murderer .
Leaving myself within this conundrum.
Do I devalue life, because your lust for blood with intent is, pulsating my blood beyond a enticing and provocative pace.
I am scathed and mindful of the Demonness Serene.
Am I to be considered dangerous?
You this aviator author. Have spread, my head, away from
Writing. Are you a keeper of your creed of fate?
How many lines must be uttered or grieved. Fading within the shaden creek.
I thought a moment I could easily toss my thoughts away after I
read a darkened piece. I took my time. I thoughly read every twisted, greedy, and and deplorable letter.
I am awestruck.
I have never been so, thoroughly shaken.
From my haunted thoughts,of dreaming demons.
You have faden to become an undiscovered gem I shall treasure.
You are by far the, Pulitzer of an author
My lover is death. Are you murder?
With these lines I discovered I was changed .
♡don't play with words that don't suit you.
smarter than most, beautiful are you.
wicked, unclean, demonness serene.♡
With respect,
Beth
13th Jan 2018 8:57am
Oh Beth, that was wonderful!
i am flattered you found that in your read of this relatively avg poem of mine. i am so happy you stopped by. sorry that you're not around anymore.
<3
i am flattered you found that in your read of this relatively avg poem of mine. i am so happy you stopped by. sorry that you're not around anymore.
<3
