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once in a flower'd moon
from water to wine
the wizard conjures belief
not in word but deed
the more you label
greater the distance will be
including yourself
the moon is engorged
a bloom'd orb bursting with seed
stop and smell the hope
how deep is your love
for no one but you
~
Published 22nd May 2016
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22nd May 2016 1:30am
deeds indeed mean more
than words, and naming them
will limit them
but don't tell the writers..:)
than words, and naming them
will limit them
but don't tell the writers..:)
22nd May 2016 3:15am
I love, the moon is engorged, a bloom'd orb. Cool. I think AEMelia is or was hosting a competition about the moon. I am working on a revision that features the lunar lady as well. Namaste. :)
24th May 2016 4:06pm
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22nd May 2016 7:34am
22nd May 2016 8:00am
Cannot get any more spiritus or
lovely as this my Ahavati.
I heard and felt the 'ting' vibration.
-Howlings
lovely as this my Ahavati.
I heard and felt the 'ting' vibration.
-Howlings
22nd May 2016 8:50am
"the moon is engorged
a bloom'd orb bursting with seed
stop and smell the hope
how deep is your love
for no one but you " <---Boom! There it is! Beautiful, inspiring and well worth the read.
Pen Respect~
22nd May 2016 11:15am
24th May 2016 4:05pm
Anonymous
22nd May 2016 9:39pm
I love this piece, so deeply philosophical
a basic truth, excellent pen
a basic truth, excellent pen
24th May 2016 4:06pm
23rd May 2016 10:26am
rainy lady quoted my favorite lines
but this really is gorgeous from start to finish miss
xoxo
but this really is gorgeous from start to finish miss
xoxo
23rd May 2016 10:49pm
27th May 2016 4:56am
Perception can outweigh reality ... That's what I loved mist about the play "Oz" ... Which reality is real? ... is always THE question, and just how real is the magic?
27th May 2016 1:03pm
