All About Control

I'm all over this piece  N1
Treating him like I've just picked him up
for selfish hidden wants and desires to reveal
To being treated like I'm free of charge to experiment over till he's satisfied

Vocality between two heightens many love making experiences

It does indeed and you put that very nicely Rose.

There is one other thing i am examining in this poem
Who is really in control here?  The lines can get blurred
when the sub is giving instructions.

My wife used me like this last night in a standing position
and i never uttered a word but you know and i know
that i was in heaven. :-)

It's not necessary to have tight lines between who's sub and who's dominant  
Personally my lover likes to switch this  around  
I'm happy to accept that my submissiveness is not always to be just that  
I'm learning to make my own demands from time to time with pleasurable results  
I have dirty desires he has dirty desires why on earth should we suppress these because each other cant swap roles  
It's about experimenting with each other  
Finding what you both like to get you both singing blasphemy cries loud and fuck me hard clear  hehe  
Appologies for over commenting in advance xD

You are absolutely right, i was just thinking of it from my own perspective.
i don't like to dominate really but of course in a relationship there is a sense of balance.
Thanks again and for placing it on your reading list, you honor my efforts.

Sense of balance
Perfectly put N1
If you be in tune with one another
then it just works in my opinion
Dom sub sub dom it's irrelevant
When making love to each other
when hearts in tune

Humm!!! intriguing visual!!!
Disturbing its verse
My thoughts divisional
whether excited or perverse

lol

<3 dkruie

i know it's a unfamiliar concept to you and so i am thankful that you challenged yourself to read it
and respond to it honestly.

"My thoughts divisional
whether excited or perverse"

Does it have to be a choice?
i see nothing wrong with it being both.
If it excites then let it excite, no need to ask why. :-)

Choice??? humm that's a good question... man...in mind to the fullest, venture this genre in verse I've not.... how about perversely excited :)

I have been fascinated by domination, submission and control since joining DU - it's not a scene or life experience I am used to, having said that it provokes my mind and causes the creation of creative thoughts I probably would never have had without reading poems like this. At first it was difficult reading and some of the more extreme poems are still difficult. But I now enjoy this genre of poetry and thinking about these concepts.

thanks for sharing and making me think :-)

This area of human sexuality has not been discussed much in the main stream
for various reasons, so for one such as i poetry is a good opportunity to express
thoughts and emotions on it.  That it intrigues and inspires thought from those
unfamiliar with this semi hidden world is wonderful really.  It's a safe avenue
of investigation but of course challenging.  

Very glad you read it, was informative for me to learn how it affected you.

I absolutely love this! Couldn't add it to my Reading List fast enough!!! In my opinion, there is nothing more pleasurable than having a partner that's open to new experiences and exploration.

Well thank you very much for that enthusiastic comment.
Delighted you enjoyed it Lyrical_Temptation

No, don't let him have all the control. Take it in turns. ;-)

To me it's just confusing if i switch and anyway i love serving much more than being served.
We all have our little peculiarities :-)
Thank you for visiting me Hydrodgones.

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I love this poem as it vividly describes one of my most desired kinks.

Thanks!

Female dominance is my weakness, for me nothing compares to serving Glad you liked it debug, thank you