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I hav
I have
I have here
Eye hav'a baggieful of indispensable
unlightenments
to dispense
to dispense
to dispense wit be
for[e] aye
free the sweet birds held captive in (me) skull for
way-too-many
moments.....................
thee leavened bread is True to form a new body of christ
to get us by at
l e a s t until thee
h o l y d a y s
(of ob ob obligations),
& perhaps re'envision The Sign of The Cross
as I n e e d s estop
this
pud'ling pootery,
& give the folks a fair (faux) shake for their moneysworth..
...
if only I could bleed more
a f f a b l y ,
avidly,
v i v i d l y ,
(y e t
it might become overly obvious despite
any thing I do )
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Published 14th May 2016
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14th May 2016 1:54pm
dispense away, o great
metaphysical chemist -
with special dispensation
and an affable, ineffable
aspirin...
metaphysical chemist -
with special dispensation
and an affable, ineffable
aspirin...
14th May 2016 11:25pm
Anonymous
14th May 2016 9:00pm
Sir DanielX. . .your poetry needs not more bleeding but more spectators less seduced by religion. . .upbeat doesn't even begin to describe this piece but very inspirational to get us to think. . .~xo, Devlin.
14th May 2016 11:30pm
whilst i may falter every now & then, i've decided that the only category worthy of my missives is, indeed, UPBEAT.......
(tis so paradoxymoronically related to Beat Up, that nothing else can suffice)
thankyou, love
(tis so paradoxymoronically related to Beat Up, that nothing else can suffice)
thankyou, love
Anonymous
16th May 2016 7:41am
You're very welcome, my SaxMan;)
