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In the Cards?
Why did I fall in love so hard?
A queen was dealt within the cards.
It’s an old story often told,
I stepped right in and I was bold.
Then things began to fall apart,
Things which bored into both our hearts.
I fear everything is now gone,
I’ll be happy when I’m reborn.
A queen was dealt within the cards.
It’s an old story often told,
I stepped right in and I was bold.
Then things began to fall apart,
Things which bored into both our hearts.
I fear everything is now gone,
I’ll be happy when I’m reborn.
Published 11th May 2016
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Anonymous
12th May 2016 5:10am
I believe in this Jerry... We don't just end and we indeed come back, not making the same mistakes, my more than likely making a few new ones.... Recalling past memories wondering "where the hell did that come from?" How many times do you think it will take before no mistakes or regrets are ever made...??
This one made me ponder my friend...
With love - Taryn xoxo
This one made me ponder my friend...
With love - Taryn xoxo
12th May 2016 9:43am
Wow! 3:30 and I have been wake since 2:15, I hate nights like this,
I don't believe we will ever stop making mistakes, Taryn. Humans rarely stop making these kind of fuckups. But you are quite right we do come back, it just doesn't seem that we will at times. Thank you.
I don't believe we will ever stop making mistakes, Taryn. Humans rarely stop making these kind of fuckups. But you are quite right we do come back, it just doesn't seem that we will at times. Thank you.
