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Even In Sadness.....
as you have turned from my sweet luv
I walk alone in the darkness of life
light from a black moon casting my shadow
upon a wall mimicing my every move
I'm thinking of you with great sadness
wondering how we got to separate places
in my shadows footprints I suddenly halted
crying to turn and face my turmoiled soul
shadow motionless......lifeless......silent
stood there as it separated from the wall
we stood there and wept together
then I heard a sigh when it stepped within me
warm calmness flowed thru my veins
then realized when I heard your whisper
from deep inside my bewildered heart
that you've never been too far away
it was not my shadow upon the wall
but yours continually watching over mine
walking beside me just where you belong
bringing our spiritual souls hugging once again
Even In Sadness.....I feel your luv
Luv ya my sweet hunny Bee! Xoxo :)
I walk alone in the darkness of life
light from a black moon casting my shadow
upon a wall mimicing my every move
I'm thinking of you with great sadness
wondering how we got to separate places
in my shadows footprints I suddenly halted
crying to turn and face my turmoiled soul
shadow motionless......lifeless......silent
stood there as it separated from the wall
we stood there and wept together
then I heard a sigh when it stepped within me
warm calmness flowed thru my veins
then realized when I heard your whisper
from deep inside my bewildered heart
that you've never been too far away
it was not my shadow upon the wall
but yours continually watching over mine
walking beside me just where you belong
bringing our spiritual souls hugging once again
Even In Sadness.....I feel your luv
Luv ya my sweet hunny Bee! Xoxo :)
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Re. Even In Sadness.....
11th May 2016 3:18am
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11th May 2016 3:24am
Awe Kavik.....you're so sweet and a great friend....thank you......sending you luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Even In Sadness.....
Even in the darkness the light of your purple luv shines through to burn away the shadows of doubt trying to haunt your heart.
Another wonderful poem G!
JJ
Another wonderful poem G!
JJ
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11th May 2016 4:47am
Hey JJ......you're a sweet soul my friend......thank you for leaving a warm smile upon my page.......I always appreciate your visits......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Even In Sadness.....
11th May 2016 1:56pm
Whenever one needs to 'see' unlimited love shine, they need look no further than on your page to find it. :)
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13th May 2016 2:33am
Awe Poet......you truly warm my heart with your words......thank you sweet friend for such uplifting words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Even In Sadness.....
11th May 2016 2:31pm
Oh, I absolutely relate to this, flower.
It is a personal, ongoing thing I am
sad to say, but I know within my heart
I will bounce back . . .
It is a personal, ongoing thing I am
sad to say, but I know within my heart
I will bounce back . . .
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13th May 2016 2:39am
Dear SG......you will bounce back.....cause I know your soul is strong.......sadness I think we all feel time to time.....then a true friend comes a long and surrenders a hug and we smile.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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11th May 2016 5:09pm
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13th May 2016 2:41am
You're a beautiful soul Crim.......thank you for bringing your sweet smile upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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13th May 2016 2:48am
Awe Again.....thank you, thank you, thank you!! Good call on the "wept", appreciate you.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
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13th May 2016 7:11am
Re. Even In Sadness.....
11th May 2016 9:23pm
I'm so glad that shadow proved a comfort Flower, but I hope your love showed to give it substance. It's true this is melancholy but I love the note of comfort at the end. You're sweetness comes through, shining on the darkest days, even in sadness. Excellent work!
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13th May 2016 2:54am
........and your words are an added comfort my friend.......at times even the greatest of luv feels sadness......if it's true it always come back with warmth with hearts still connected and felt.......thank you Crow for the blessing of your words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
12th May 2016 4:56am
Beautiful Sun Kissed.... Oh my... Ohhhh myyyy....
"warm calmness flowed thru my veins
then realized when I heard your whisper
from deep inside my bewildered heart
that you've never been too far away
it was not my shadow upon the wall
but yours continually watching over mine
walking beside me just where you belong
bringing our spiritual souls hugging once again"
~ how I just love this.... Love!!! With love - Sweet S xo :)
"warm calmness flowed thru my veins
then realized when I heard your whisper
from deep inside my bewildered heart
that you've never been too far away
it was not my shadow upon the wall
but yours continually watching over mine
walking beside me just where you belong
bringing our spiritual souls hugging once again"
~ how I just love this.... Love!!! With love - Sweet S xo :)
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13th May 2016 2:59am
Sweet S.......thank you for always bringing a smile upon my ink......always feeling your warmness.......you're a blessing to me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Even In Sadness.....
13th May 2016 6:28pm
separation even when temporary is still always sad - one of the down sides of love :-(
beautifully crafted piece :-)
beautifully crafted piece :-)
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14th May 2016 3:30am
Hey David.....it is sad......but the sacred connection isn't broken.......it's felt in every thought and whisper.....thank you for sharing your words with me and smiling upon my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Even In Sadness.....
14th May 2016 1:27am
"it was not my shadow upon the wall
but yours continually watching over mine
walking beside me just where you belong "<--- beautiful, heartfelt lines, pprincess....
Such a gentle heart you have.... ..xo
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14th May 2016 3:37am
Awe Sexy Rain......what a blessing to see you back......thank you for smiling upon my ink......when a soul luvs you.....your never alone......even in silence.......appreciate you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)