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First To Be Last
Independent obeys and conforms
goes with the flow rejects norms
apprehensive and without a care
going nowhere to purchase a fare
Soft as caterpillar stings as knife
dead as a door nail vibrant as life
an intellectual thicker than a post
when least expected admits most
goes with the flow rejects norms
apprehensive and without a care
going nowhere to purchase a fare
Soft as caterpillar stings as knife
dead as a door nail vibrant as life
an intellectual thicker than a post
when least expected admits most
Published 7th May 2016
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7th May 2016 12:22pm
Some vent Linda, some vent! There are [oxy]morons out there, sad truth of our lives, got to deal with them and sure this poem of yours, goes a long way to nail it!!
7th May 2016 9:43pm
Thanks for that, you're a sweetheart.
It's not perfect, but i hope it says what i wanted.
It's not perfect, but i hope it says what i wanted.
13th May 2016 8:35pm
it's good to write off the fence - tell it like it is :-)
great stuff :-)
great stuff :-)
13th May 2016 9:59pm
