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Let Me Sleep
tangled grey
swirling beneath
fabrications and
twisted allegations
numb surprise
hidden within
strange habits
of lusting
pathetic touch
soft overgrowth
painted weak
by simplicity
lost again
forever longing
for strength
denied constantly
levee breaks
flooded soul
falling fast
no reprieve
resting now
bed of nails
injecting truth
let me sleep
swirling beneath
fabrications and
twisted allegations
numb surprise
hidden within
strange habits
of lusting
pathetic touch
soft overgrowth
painted weak
by simplicity
lost again
forever longing
for strength
denied constantly
levee breaks
flooded soul
falling fast
no reprieve
resting now
bed of nails
injecting truth
let me sleep
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Re. Let Me Sleep
7th May 2016 5:12pm
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7th May 2016 6:22pm
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7th May 2016 7:01pm
Re. Let Me Sleep
7th May 2016 8:08pm
this write, man, this write... I am speechless. But it struck a chord so deep I had to comment. Stanza four was masterful.
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7th May 2016 8:13pm
Thanks, Hades.. from a brilliant writer like yourself, that means a lot to me.. i'm so honored to be in your RL.. i appreciate the support.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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7th May 2016 10:45pm
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Re. Let Me Sleep
Anonymous
8th May 2016 7:11pm
My brother, to read this pains me...reaching deep within tearing into me...this will eventually be in my Reading List...gripping you with loving affection...
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
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9th May 2016 7:14pm
Thanks, Taryn.. i appreciate your commentary.. it always means so much to me.. because you always get where i'm coming from.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 12:44pm
Such a captivating piece. It pulls you in, and takes you on the journey.
Brilliant work. Love this.
Brilliant work. Love this.
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