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Where do i think i'm going
where do i think i've been
how do i know a knowing
how can i put it back in
When can i just be being
when can all doubts go
what my eyes are seeing
what my heart can know
Who do i think that i am
who can see me for me
why must i give a damn
why i'm bound and free
where do i think i've been
how do i know a knowing
how can i put it back in
When can i just be being
when can all doubts go
what my eyes are seeing
what my heart can know
Who do i think that i am
who can see me for me
why must i give a damn
why i'm bound and free
Published 6th May 2016
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6th May 2016 11:47am
6th May 2016 11:58am
Anonymous
6th May 2016 5:15pm
Being yourself the most beautiful of all
Love your ink my friend
<3 dkruie
Love your ink my friend
<3 dkruie
6th May 2016 5:22pm
6th May 2016 10:59pm
This is good work, very thought provoking indeed, you have knitted so many human emotions in a short poem with such beauty, it is impressive indeed! Loved the last stanza... echoes with every human I believe
6th May 2016 11:50pm
13th May 2016 8:58pm
really thought provoking, the kind of poem that gets you writing something of your own - thanks for sharing :-)
13th May 2016 11:02pm
Oh i love that, a better compliment i cannot wish for,
to inspire ideas for other poets such as yourself.
Very much appreciate your well thought out comments.
to inspire ideas for other poets such as yourself.
Very much appreciate your well thought out comments.
