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Sore
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Sore
beneath your feet lays
myself, the rest of the world
somewhere in between.
Written by
Kameron
Published
10th Jul 2011
| Edited
5th Nov 2011
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opheliac
10th Jul 2011 11:00pm
It's wonderful!
good job:)
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2011 11:36pm
It's beautiful. It might be a senryu as opposed to a haiku. I'm not completely sure on this one, though, so don't take me too seriously. :]
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Kameron
11th Jul 2011 1:53am
Argh. I am always getting mixed up when it comes to senryu. I'll see what comes about. And thanks you guys. (:
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2011 3:22am
This point can be argued either way...nature does encompass human nature as well, although senryu were made for that purpose, either way its great!
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Kameron
11th Jul 2011 3:25am
Thanks! :)
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