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Gimme rain,I approve it.
Summer is,
mid slumber-
warm and waiting.
Spring spins a
web of moist
strings.
[lies]
Everything is
much to dry;
it only appears
that rain has
fallen.
[Lies]
Send Summer's rains,
let this land be razed;
pummel and batter
this place.
:::::::::::::
Twisters ...
... Hurricanes
:::::::::::::::::
Days of rain,to cleanse
and renew;
starting from scratch,
if that's what one
must do.
mid slumber-
warm and waiting.
Spring spins a
web of moist
strings.
[lies]
Everything is
much to dry;
it only appears
that rain has
fallen.
[Lies]
Send Summer's rains,
let this land be razed;
pummel and batter
this place.
:::::::::::::
Twisters ...
... Hurricanes
:::::::::::::::::
Days of rain,to cleanse
and renew;
starting from scratch,
if that's what one
must do.
Published 2nd May 2016
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This is upbeat to me,in a way
but sounds bleak in
it's imagery.
I didn't know how to
classify this thing.
Suggestions?
but sounds bleak in
it's imagery.
I didn't know how to
classify this thing.
Suggestions?
3rd May 2016 00:15am
3rd May 2016 00:41am
Anonymous
3rd May 2016 1:33am
I must say, just place where
in the next best ..paired with
your heart.. upbeat. .perfect
Oh definitely gimme rains too!
we've plenty of tropical and
topicallly soothing yet awing
at what down pours can do.
I love it much, can smell it
actually
in the next best ..paired with
your heart.. upbeat. .perfect
Oh definitely gimme rains too!
we've plenty of tropical and
topicallly soothing yet awing
at what down pours can do.
I love it much, can smell it
actually
3rd May 2016 1:38am
Torrential downpours
of love for you doll.
Such a glory,you are.
Thank you
so very much.
-J'm
of love for you doll.
Such a glory,you are.
Thank you
so very much.
-J'm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
3rd May 2016 6:44pm
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3rd May 2016 6:53pm
My dear,I will take you
up on that...for sure
So honored
thank you,dearly
-j
up on that...for sure
So honored
thank you,dearly
-j
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
4th May 2016 10:23pm
<< post removed >>
5th May 2016 00:15am
