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Way You Luv Me
As I lay here in silence
Thats when I feel you so sweetly
At the end of my busy day
When I'm relaxed and calm
Close my eyes and you appear
Your spirit laying within me
Our souls lay skin to skin
With hearts touching
Feel your passion
Thru an imagined kiss
Under our blanket of luv
So warm and snuggly
Safe and secure wrapped in you
In my thoughts and dreams
You're my every dream come true
Thank you for all you give
For the unselfish way you luv me
Luv ya my sweet hunny bee xo :)
Published 24th Apr 2016
| Edited 26th Apr 2016
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24th Apr 2016 11:10pm
I imagine you're just as generous as he is. This is so typically luvly and gentle, just the thing for a Sunday afternoon on an almost too quiet day. Your hunny bee is lucky to have you for cuddles, and I'm comforted just reading this. Fine work as always sweet Flower!
24th Apr 2016 11:15pm
Awe Crow......your words always make my heart shiver with warmness......thank you for sharing a bit of quietness time with your cuddling thoughts with me.......appreciate you very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Apr 2016 2:30am
25th Apr 2016 1:56pm
With the right person who luvs you for who you are you will.......you're a sweet soul......so I can't see why you couldn't be luved.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Apr 2016 5:37pm
This is love's emotion took to a "T," so
sensuous and tingling with sex even
though there was no sexual behavior.
One thing, hope you don't mind . . .
"Your my every dream come true> . . . I think "you're" rather than "your."
sensuous and tingling with sex even
though there was no sexual behavior.
One thing, hope you don't mind . . .
"Your my every dream come true> . . . I think "you're" rather than "your."
26th Apr 2016 3:17am
Hey SG......I'm glad you thought this sensual but sexy......happy you felt different emotions as I did when I wrote it......thank you my friend. Oops!! Never can get those your things right at times......LOL!! Thank you! Purple smiles & hugs xo :)
25th Apr 2016 8:49pm
26th Apr 2016 3:20am
Thank you David for the sweet smile you always bring to my heart with the words you leave me......glad you enjoyed......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
28th Apr 2016 5:49pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, loved, loved, loved....
"Safe and secure wrapped in you
In my thoughts and dreams
You're my every dream come true
Thank you for all you give
For the unselfish way you luv me"
With love - Sweet S xo ;)
"Safe and secure wrapped in you
In my thoughts and dreams
You're my every dream come true
Thank you for all you give
For the unselfish way you luv me"
With love - Sweet S xo ;)
1st May 2016 1:16am
Awe Sweet S......I'm so happy you luved this......it felt awesome to write.......thank you for bringing me a sacred smile and luv to my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd May 2016 11:17am
I don't know how I missed this beautiful luv poem. Buzzing with serenity!
JJ
JJ
2nd May 2016 11:55pm
I'm honored JJ that you found this.......glad you enjoyed the buuuuzzzz!! Purple smiles & hugs xo :)
4th May 2016 00:45am
4th May 2016 1:00am
Hey SO......thank you for sharing your smile with me tonight......glad you enjoyed this......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
